poemranker ::Chuds in the mall by razorgrin

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Haiku № 3214

Chuds in the mall

by razorgrin

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Jul 2002 · 15 comments

Cross hangs between breasts Rolls spill from 'neath halter top Wal-Mart frightens me.

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15 comments

[6] -=SeTTle=- 6-Jul-02/11:25 AM Reply
BHUBUBUHLLRGRLRBRLRB I MIXED VIAGRA AND OLEAN
[10] daniella 7-Jul-02/5:05 AM Reply
essentially america
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15-Jul-02/1:12 PM Reply
What about: "Linoleum shakes/Rolls spill from 'neath halter top/Tides of flab rush in" ?
[10] http://David Bowman 23-Jul-02/9:02 AM Reply
And Sainsburys and Tesco and K Mart and Waitrose. Great Lines! Real!
[7] aurora 23-Jul-02/6:27 PM Reply
wall-mart frightens me too
[7] nentwined 31-Jul-02/4:45 AM Reply
this is really funny. :)
[10] Venus 8-Aug-02/11:00 AM Reply
I'm not much for Haiku, but I love this one!
[n/a] razorgrin 8-Aug-02/11:11 AM Reply
thanks!
[0] Mephisto 19-Aug-02/5:16 PM Reply
How is this crap made out to be good? This is the worst poetry ive ever read.
[7] evergreen 19-Aug-02/5:39 PM Reply
crap??? i thought it was hilarious!
[9] dragonfly 20-Sep-02/12:21 AM Reply
LoL!!! I love it!
[n/a] Jagang 20-Nov-02/12:41 PM Reply
That shit was fucking horrible.
[n/a] razorgrin › Jagang 20-Nov-02/1:15 PM Reply
bite me, churlish crab-louse. you're just all pissy because I said your poems are crap. Still as articulate as always, i see.
[0] sk8boardandpoems 25-Feb-03/3:41 PM Reply
chuds in the mail? maybe you should send away for a brain and a soul because you obviously wont find one on ebay worth your reach
[n/a] razorgrin › sk8boardandpoems 26-Feb-03/7:15 AM Reply
"mall". You really should give up.