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Chuds in the mall (Haiku) by razorgrin Cross hangs between breasts
Rolls spill from 'neath halter top
Wal-Mart frightens me.
Up the ladder:
Here In The Heart of Amber
Down the ladder:
To Kiss
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Posted: July 6, 2002 7:38 AM PDT; Last modified: July 6, 2002 7:38 AM PDTWeighted score: 6.078814 Overall Rank: 1161 Comments:
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6-Jul-02/11:25 AM
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BHUBUBUHLLRGRLRBRLRB I MIXED VIAGRA AND OLEAN
essentially america
What about: "Linoleum shakes/Rolls spill from 'neath halter top/Tides of flab rush in" ?
And Sainsburys and Tesco and K Mart and Waitrose. Great Lines! Real!
wall-mart frightens me too
this is really funny. :)
I'm not much for Haiku, but I love this one!
How is this crap made out to be good? This is the worst poetry ive ever read.
crap??? i thought it was hilarious!
LoL!!! I love it!
That shit was fucking horrible.
bite me, churlish crab-louse. you're just all pissy because I said your poems are crap. Still as articulate as always, i see.
chuds in the mail? maybe you should send away for a brain and a soul because you obviously wont find one on ebay worth your reach
"mall". You really should give up.
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