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Chuds in the mall (Haiku) by razorgrin

Cross hangs between breasts Rolls spill from 'neath halter top Wal-Mart frightens me.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15-Jul-02/1:12 PM
What about: "Linoleum shakes/Rolls spill from 'neath halter top/Tides of flab rush in" ?




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