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Chuds in the mall
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Haiku
) by
razorgrin
Cross hangs between breasts Rolls spill from 'neath halter top Wal-Mart frightens me.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
15-Jul-02/1:12 PM
What about: "Linoleum shakes/Rolls spill from 'neath halter top/Tides of flab rush in" ?
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