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Love Turn (Other) by Tormentedsoul718
Curled in a corner,thinking of things i can't face Wonder why i cry,Holding onto the things i embrace Wiping the tears away from my darkened eyes Hold my breath so no one hears my angered cries I stumble to my feet,but i walk alone again today Feel the rain as the clouds turn the sky gray Feeling nothing,but hurt so deep inside of me Can't walk on anymore,so i drop to one knee I remember my past,and fall to the floor Tears arise,and my body feels rotted to the core I lay there thinking of the love that i lost Laying there catching my heart as its tossed Crying cause nothing else seems the help the pain Cutting myself,cause all of this is driving me insane I reach a chair,i sit,aid my wounds,and dry my face Grab some paper and try to get this feeling to erase Read the lines over and over,they get stuck in my head Wondering why,in love,somethings are left unsaid I stare out my window into the cold dark night But i can't see anything at all within my site So i close my eyes and dream of you But you were the one that was never true And no matter how much i push the thoughts of you away Everytime i hear your name,i'll think of you everyday You hurt me and i feel so much anger because of what you did But i'll never forget you,and i'll never know what you really hid Please come back to me,i need your loving arms for another night But i don't think you can make everything alright Left alone i feel anger,i feel pain,i feel nothing And i know if you come back,more of it you will bring

Up the ladder: simple silence
Down the ladder: van Gogh's Irises

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.1666665
Weighted score: 5.5827065
Overall Rank: 2339
Posted: September 4, 2002 12:50 AM PDT; Last modified: September 4, 2002 12:50 AM PDT
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[9] vulcan @ 80.242.3.101 | 4-Sep-02/1:25 AM | Reply
I liked the end.A lover's spontaneity of pain is tempestuosly expressed.9
[10] sk8boardandpoems @ 24.167.109.182 | 1-Mar-03/12:15 PM | Reply
wow....one word wow..have you gotten any of these published? I really like them..Keep on writing..your poems compared to mine will definetly blow mine away i am only 12 and i love to write your poems inspire me to keep on writing no mater what people say..they belittle me and my work but after i have read thses nothing can put me down anymore another 10
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