on lost by mitchski
7 Aug 2002, 12:38 PM
um...ok, i like it, but its strange
on What R U? by Sigh'ense...
31 Jul 2002, 5:27 PM
well I, personally, am a fan of yours...hehe.
on Disillusioned & Confused by Sigh'ense...
31 Jul 2002, 5:25 PM
umm...i don't really know what to say other that "this is good" so...keep up the good work
on Alone by shwenatjadeflower
31 Jul 2002, 5:20 PM
thank you
on The Mirror Man by Mister Cakes
28 Jul 2002, 12:04 AM
you are just looking in the mirror. nice way of explaining it though. watch mothman prophesies and you'll see scary shit about mirrors. :)
on For you by Montinequego
25 Jul 2002, 10:43 PM
lovely *tear*
on Heaven vs. Hell by angel born in hell
25 Jul 2002, 10:40 PM
hmm...don't kill yourself you'd be wasting talent. :)
on freehand by Montinequego
25 Jul 2002, 10:35 PM
0.o weirdo. hehe. love you.
on Knowing you by shwenatjadeflower
25 Jul 2002, 10:31 PM
no i haven't although no soubt you wish i were. love yas!
on Seasonal Memories by ErgoErgun
18 Jul 2002, 3:35 PM
i dunno what to say besides this is really good, why cant all your stuff be like this?
on wednesday night after church by unknown
18 Jul 2002, 3:32 PM
blah
on Economics 499 by ErgoErgun
18 Jul 2002, 3:32 PM
the last two lines are exactly right
on Nicotine Ruse by Red_is_life
16 Jul 2002, 11:52 PM
i think the thirrd line shoud be swithched to say cigarette balancing, but its kool.
on Flies by Red_is_life
16 Jul 2002, 11:50 PM
i like it
on Sheep---(Cross Rhyming) by shwenatjadeflower
12 Jul 2002, 12:29 PM
thank you for saying its cool jenn
on Succulent Fruit by Jody Conn
12 Jul 2002, 11:59 AM
very hot i like the double meanings
on When I Was Eight by JuddNelson
12 Jul 2002, 5:04 AM
i dont rightly know what to say, it was very moving. i gave it a 9.
on Concrete Wet Dreams In A Paper Sack by thelonefrobros
12 Jul 2002, 2:00 AM
cut out the whole last stanza and.... nevermind the first stanza with more would be a good poem and the second one with more too, but none of the stanzas go together