| Re: lost by mitchski |
7-Aug-02/12:38 PM |
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um...ok, i like it, but its strange
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| Re: What R U? by Sigh'ense... |
31-Jul-02/5:27 PM |
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well I, personally, am a fan of yours...hehe.
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| Re: Disillusioned & Confused by Sigh'ense... |
31-Jul-02/5:25 PM |
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umm...i don't really know what to say other that "this is good" so...keep up the good work
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| Re: Alone by shwenatjadeflower |
31-Jul-02/5:20 PM |
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| Re: The Mirror Man by Mister Cakes |
28-Jul-02/12:04 AM |
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you are just looking in the mirror. nice way of explaining it though. watch mothman prophesies and you'll see scary shit about mirrors. :)
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| Re: For you by Montinequego |
25-Jul-02/10:43 PM |
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| Re: Heaven vs. Hell by angel born in hell |
25-Jul-02/10:40 PM |
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hmm...don't kill yourself you'd be wasting talent. :)
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| Re: freehand by Montinequego |
25-Jul-02/10:35 PM |
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0.o weirdo. hehe. love you.
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| Re: Knowing you by shwenatjadeflower |
25-Jul-02/10:31 PM |
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no i haven't although no soubt you wish i were. love yas!
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| Re: Seasonal Memories by ErgoErgun |
18-Jul-02/3:35 PM |
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i dunno what to say besides this is really good, why cant all your stuff be like this?
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| Re: wednesday night after church by unknown |
18-Jul-02/3:32 PM |
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| Re: Economics 499 by ErgoErgun |
18-Jul-02/3:32 PM |
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the last two lines are exactly right
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| Re: Carrie by ErgoErgun |
18-Jul-02/3:30 PM |
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| Re: White Lie by ErgoErgun |
18-Jul-02/3:23 PM |
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i like this, its nice, very truthful
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| Re: Nicotine Ruse by Red_is_life |
16-Jul-02/11:52 PM |
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i think the thirrd line shoud be swithched to say cigarette balancing, but its kool.
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| Re: Flies by Red_is_life |
16-Jul-02/11:50 PM |
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| Re: Sheep---(Cross Rhyming) by shwenatjadeflower |
12-Jul-02/12:29 PM |
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thank you for saying its cool jenn
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| Re: Succulent Fruit by Jody Conn |
12-Jul-02/11:59 AM |
very hot i like the double meanings
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| Re: When I Was Eight by JuddNelson |
12-Jul-02/5:04 AM |
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i dont rightly know what to say, it was very moving. i gave it a 9.
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| Re: Concrete Wet Dreams In A Paper Sack by thelonefrobros |
12-Jul-02/2:00 AM |
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cut out the whole last stanza and.... nevermind the first stanza with more would be a good poem and the second one with more too, but none of the stanzas go together
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