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Economics 499 (Lyric) by ErgoErgun
Debtor's prison exists solely in the soul these days: mortgages are waged on the brain; residual payments appear in pain. In the territory of inefficiency economics loses currency: Demand is displaced by cajoling and open hands, Supply by a roll of the die and clemency of man... Still, the masquerade continues: Human flesh denotes the confines of fines, and margin calls on guilt force dollar signs from passerby's. Here's some modern economic theory: In the sanctum of ineptitude what balances being? Charity mixed with one's desire for living.

Up the ladder: i was

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.7222223
Weighted score: 4.735396
Overall Rank: 11734
Posted: May 14, 2002 11:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 14, 2002 11:30 PM PDT
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Comments:
[2]... anonymous @ 206.110.252.242 | 16-May-02/4:34 PM | Reply
Not bad. Not good either. Actually, really not good. Go back to economics and leave English alone.
[2]... anonymous @ 216.144.194.246 | 17-May-02/3:54 AM | Reply
Provocative and nice authority of the language. Idiots give great poems bad ratings because they can't comprehend meaning. I feel your pain.
[2] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 194.82.103.72 | 23-May-02/10:48 AM | Reply
Nice allegory of economics! No, wait, it's crap!
[n/a] gsosville @ 209.119.37.192 | 31-May-02/8:12 AM | Reply
boring, retarded, and totally crap, what the fuck are you talking about?
[0] deleted user @ 205.188.197.179 | 15-Jun-02/1:28 PM | Reply
That was pretty stupid you must not have much of a life to write about economics.
[8] shwenatjadeflower @ 68.12.149.5 | 18-Jul-02/3:32 PM | Reply
the last two lines are exactly right
[9] -=SeTTle=- @ 63.214.88.121 | 29-Jul-02/9:30 PM | Reply
Not very poetic, but quite good all the same.
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 22-Aug-02/8:53 AM | Reply
passers by.
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