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Re: a comment on Alone by shwenatjadeflower 11-Jan-03/8:13 PM
:) to say it I hate, but we shall not date.
Re: Knowing you by shwenatjadeflower 5-Sep-02/7:30 PM
;)
Re: Kissing the Doppelganger by Wulf 26-Aug-02/7:47 PM
This poem made me hot. thats all i gotta say. lol. Love ~Jade
Re: School by shwenatjadeflower 26-Aug-02/6:57 PM
You are so sweet to say so Doylum. I am glad you enjoy my "poetry" I wish there wasn't a limit on the amount of poems I could write per week. When I get worked up over something I just wanna log on and write. But i can't as often as I want. but that's what all these poems are. Your comment made my day. Thanks. ~Jade
Re: School by shwenatjadeflower 26-Aug-02/6:36 PM
you guys are so cool. lol. enjoy the poetry. :) if you can call this rubbish i write poetry.
Re: Mobile home agenda by Bachus 25-Aug-02/1:53 PM
Normal trailer park life. only thing missing is playing in the sprinkler-<a few holes punched in the hose> i like it. :)
Re: Hunny by Venus 25-Aug-02/1:08 PM
if ever this predicament ever befalls your lovely head again...do not poison his drink. send him blueberry muffins with one or two daddy long legs <without the legs> in the mix. they are the most poisonous spider in the world, but they can't bite humans. it works. i know. :) ~Jade
Re: Exquisite Explosion by Venus 25-Aug-02/12:59 PM
This is funny as well as sexy...nice work. :) ~Jade
Re: The Ultimate~Creep goes to Mecca! by Bachus 25-Aug-02/11:16 AM
My dog just died a few weeks ago...He was the only animal I ever actually liked. He was 96% wolf-4% alaskan malamute. He was huge. He was beautiful. He hated water. We buried him in Blanchard on our friends farm where many of his offspring for four generations are living. Tasha Yarr, his mate, and Jenna, his lover, will be buried on either side of him. He even has a tombstone. It says "apaches moon...the best dog in the world...sire of 54." yep 54, and that only includes all of his... his name was Apache and his son Hannibal is already bigger than Tasha and could knock me down. My brother tried to teach him to sic. He won't. Although he once bit this guy walking through our backyard. lol. Hannibal...supposedly name after Hannibal the Great of course. It's funny the looks we get when we tell people his name. We were gonna name him Quiccher, cause he whined all the time as a pup and when people asked what the hell that annoying noise was we could say "oh thats just quiccher bitchin." lmao. well i g2g cook lunch. ~Jade
Re: The Ultimate~Creep goes to Mecca! by Bachus 24-Aug-02/3:25 PM
Ya know, this is the longest poeme I have ever read and not gotten bored at any point in it. Some people just write and write and write in circles until they find they have unduly made their point. You held me enraptured the entire time and I reread this a few times to make sure I didn't miss anything. I didn't. Thanks for a very nice, but strange story....Love ~Jade
Re: The river by kawakurdi 22-Aug-02/6:12 PM
Sensual. :)
Re: Secret, Admirer by <~> 21-Aug-02/3:28 PM
ok, sorry you guys i got it the first time, before the comments, but i think its only because i have oft had the feeling that night was creeping up behind me while i fumble for the keyhole on a dark, creepy street...maybe its just me?
Re: Secret, Admirer by <~> 21-Aug-02/3:28 PM
ok, sorry you guys i got it the first time, before the comments, but i think its only because i have oft had the feeling that night was creeping up bihind me while i fumble for the keyhole on a dark, creepy street...maybe its just me?
Re: The Only Solution by Angelofpain25 21-Aug-02/2:57 PM
Oh, my, goodness, don't listen to him, i don't know you yet-YET- but I will miss you if you die, don't kill yourself. and you are wrong, they judge you everywhere, heaven or hell or valhalla, wherever you believe you'll go after you die...it isn't the right answer to your obvious problems. your suffering won't end, if you commit suicide you'll go to hell, and there it is only eternal suffering. so, don't kill yourself, one: it isn't the end of your suffering, and two: you'd be wasting talent as a poet. lol. i hope you see that it isn't right to kill yourself, it isn't,or shouldn't be any persons choice about the time of anyone elses or thier own death. i will be looking for more poetry from you. love, jade. :)
Re: Fragments by 1Sapphire1 21-Aug-02/2:33 PM
:) this is sweet, keep up the good work
Re: Fragments by 1Sapphire1 21-Aug-02/2:33 PM
:) this is sweet, keep up the good work
Re: Friends Diminished by shwenatjadeflower 18-Aug-02/8:28 PM
omg, jenn, relax, im not going down there to fuck him, im going down there so i CAN meet him and see if he is really the person i see online, if not, duh im not gonna fuck him, but i do care for him very much, and if he is the man i think he is, then he's the man i love and he is getting my ribbon. do not think i would go to houston and just fuck him and come home, i would not, you of all people should know me better than that. i love you jenn, but sometimes i wonder at how well you know me if you can think i would do that then obviously you dont know me well enough
Re: School by shwenatjadeflower 17-Aug-02/5:40 PM
ballet? you gotta be kidding me, never would i wear a pink fucking tutu
Re: School by shwenatjadeflower 15-Aug-02/6:45 PM
yea...well....i'd like to see ya try :P
Re: Friends Diminished by shwenatjadeflower 15-Aug-02/6:43 PM
you are so sweet to protect me from the evil stupid people


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