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Exquisite Explosion

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Aug 2002 · 8 comments

Clothed in my sucker suit today I wait for you and your clockwork cloudburst With atypical authority you pine under an aquamarine architrave waiting to shower me with condensed milk confetti then comes the exquisite explosion.

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[8] Bachus 9-Aug-02/1:14 AM Reply

Exquisitet

[7] Tarquin De La Bog 14-Aug-02/4:50 PM Reply

I like this. 7. The use of language is well chosen and expressive. A nice poem.

[8] [mojo] 16-Aug-02/2:56 PM Reply

I don't know why i like this but i do. Probably the aquamarine architrave. Good word choice. I read this as a coming thunderstorm. (But may be wrong).8.

[n/a] Venus 16-Aug-02/3:24 PM Reply

A coming thunderstorm will work if you like, but think of it on a more erotic level...

[8] Bachus 16-Aug-02/4:16 PM Reply

Oh shite. Now I'm really splitting in two. Hah! LOL! Odoylum's jewels!

[8] waltfreakinwhitman 20-Aug-02/11:27 AM Reply

Nice alliteration. Did you have to discard 'creamy custard' or 'manly molasses' before arriving at 'condensed milk confetti'?

[n/a] Venus 20-Aug-02/12:55 PM Reply

May I steal those? Always on the hunt for functioning alliterations, dontcha know.

[7] shwenatjadeflower 25-Aug-02/12:59 PM Reply

This is funny as well as sexy...nice work. :) ~Jade