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Exquisite Explosion (Free verse) by Venus

Clothed in my sucker suit today I wait for you and your clockwork cloudburst With atypical authority you pine under an aquamarine architrave waiting to shower me with condensed milk confetti then comes the exquisite explosion.

Tarquin De La Bog 14-Aug-02/4:50 PM
I like this. 7. The use of language is well chosen and expressive. A nice poem.




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