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Exquisite Explosion (Free verse) by Venus

Clothed in my sucker suit today I wait for you and your clockwork cloudburst With atypical authority you pine under an aquamarine architrave waiting to shower me with condensed milk confetti then comes the exquisite explosion.

[mojo] 16-Aug-02/2:56 PM
I don't know why i like this but i do. Probably the aquamarine architrave. Good word choice. I read this as a coming thunderstorm. (But may be wrong).8.




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