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Exquisite Explosion (Free verse) by Venus

Clothed in my sucker suit today I wait for you and your clockwork cloudburst With atypical authority you pine under an aquamarine architrave waiting to shower me with condensed milk confetti then comes the exquisite explosion.

waltfreakinwhitman 20-Aug-02/11:27 AM
Nice alliteration. Did you have to discard 'creamy custard' or 'manly molasses' before arriving at 'condensed milk confetti'?




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