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When I Was Eight (Free verse) by JuddNelson
When I was eight, I was told to write a poem
On green sugar paper, talking about the weather
So the teacher could decorate the walls
And show that her class was creative.
I couldn't think of anything to write
And so I was never put on the wall with all the other kids.
When I was eleven, I was told to read poetry
And so I was spoonfed Michael Rosen's rhymes
And got told that the experience was enjoyable
And that literature could be entertaining and fun.
I never felt touched by a single letter of his
And so I didn't laugh with all the other kids.
When I was fourteen, I was told to compose poetry
That could be put in a young poets anthology
So that our school would seem literate and poetic.
All the other kids wrote about flowers and autumn
Whilst I wrote a sonnet about Hristo Stoichkov
And so I didn't get published with all the other kids.
When I was sixteen, I was told to study poety
Acquaint myself with Heaney, Duffy, and Hughes
So I could be confident in my exams and essay writing.
I told the teacher that I didn't like poetry
And that poets just bled onto paper for profit
And so I got worse grades than all the other kids.
When I was nineteen, I began to write poetry
Because you happened to make me fall in love with you
So I bled onto the page for you and you alone
And then burned the pages to cinders in case you found them.
And the reason that you changed my heart
Is because you're not like all the other kids.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 6.2793527
Overall Rank: 892
Posted: May 19, 2002 8:15 AM PDT; Last modified: May 19, 2002 8:17 AM PDT
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