| Re: FIRETRUCK by Garrett S Sexton |
1-Mar-03/10:17 AM |
You've not quite grasped this, One thinks you should adapt it as a limerick, a nice idea but what the Dickens are you trying to say?
Turn Back Dick Whittington. -6
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1-Mar-03/10:19 AM |
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One chuckled with delight.
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| Re: Tribute to the greatest ever American poem by Garrett S Sexton |
1-Mar-03/3:33 PM |
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| Re: Unmasking Wyverns by horus8 |
3-Mar-03/6:30 AM |
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Thoughtful, and quite sombre in parts but nontheless a wonderful piece of writing my boy...9
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| Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
3-Mar-03/6:38 AM |
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By Jove ! I recall marking this as an 8 but not mentioning what an excellent poem it is, original and intelligent well done
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| Re: Fresh faced Danger-Teen by INTRANSIT |
5-Mar-03/9:45 AM |
I say this is rather splendid but its a complete deviation from your other works, one feels however this more playful than a poem aimed to satiate.
Indulge yourself on a 7,
Jolly well done !
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5-Mar-03/9:48 AM |
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| Re: Something for Lynn by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
5-Mar-03/9:50 AM |
Jolly Hockey sticks I really felt I was in the picture, you've managed to bring this to life admirably. I do hope that your greek good sir because I have collaborated a trilogy of greek tradgedy and would adore you for your comment.
Thank you in advance.
Pig / Mr
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| Re: Extended Stay (the motel) by THE GOD OF DEATH |
5-Mar-03/9:54 AM |
I feel you have rightfully mastered this genre of writing. You have a gift for detailing moments and presenting them with aplomb. I jolly well wish you the best and this you have ordained this quite masterfully.
I bequeath thee a 9.
Bravo !
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| Re: An Ode to minorties that use Paprika by Shardik |
5-Mar-03/10:02 AM |
Oh Shardik you do make me snigger Sir, you have got your hands full on this one but remember not to wear your baseball cap backwards, the constabulary will think one is a thug and put you in a cell with hairy itinerant Slovakian belles.
Curses ! where did one leave the bloody comerband, I am off to play canasta my dear boy - farewell now. -7
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| Re: Prometheus sang for vultures by horus8 |
6-Mar-03/1:58 AM |
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6-Mar-03/2:21 AM |
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Quite poignant, the ending hits like a freight train, some thoughtful lines in here, some muddled but to be fair, one liked it.
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10-Mar-03/2:13 AM |
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10-Mar-03/2:37 PM |
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My lord Mr Pig told me to say he thinks this is sublime, and bloody well done ma'm
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| Re: PIGS of the world by wLeBlanc IIIw |
21-Mar-03/2:31 AM |
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Dear Sir,PLEASE LEAVE THE PIGS OUT OF THIS,
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21-Mar-03/8:37 AM |
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21-Mar-03/8:43 AM |
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Like a Vermouth, dry leaving a pleasurable after taste.
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| Re: THE POEMRANKER SEXCHART VERSION 1.2 FINAL by TanHand |
31-Mar-03/8:38 AM |
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Goodness me what a winsome chart and an honour to be included. My fritters are touched !
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8-Apr-03/9:25 AM |
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Oh utter delight ! I adored the use of language desribing the glove and the ump, thumbs up to you I say, bloody good show.
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| Re: Fraternity hazing the sheepdog by horus8 |
8-Apr-03/9:27 AM |
I hear the words on the streets to descibe this is LOL ?
Well I'm astonished I never understood the lingo, a hearty hoo haa indeed.
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