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FIRETRUCK (Other) by Garrett S Sexton Little Stevie john George loved the fire truck.
Hoped to be a fireman,but glass collecting in a bingo hall got stuck.
Balding,fat and lonley,at 21 he despaired.
Then one night he fell in love with 50 year old mare.
His lack of personality only made it last a year.
She blamed it on the age gap,but it was the mechanic in the flat down
stairs.
At least she had bore him a child.
He smiled.
I will live my dreams through him.
Little Stevie john george loves the fire truck.
Hoped to be a fireman,but glass collecting in a bing hall got stuck.
Up the ladder:
My sad life
Down the ladder:
Cancer (Lyric) by Twiggy
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Posted: March 1, 2003 1:06 AM PST; Last modified: March 1, 2003 1:06 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.7727275 Overall Rank: 11376 Comments:
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OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.3
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1-Mar-03/1:17 AM
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50? Uch! Good poem but that's gross. Some one better warn the mechanic.
You've not quite grasped this, One thinks you should adapt it as a limerick, a nice idea but what the Dickens are you trying to say?
Turn Back Dick Whittington. -6
Self~Portraits are always moving, at least to me.
Your second bingo came out only a bing which just won't do. we on;y drink orange bang.
Cool Ending
I dont get it
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