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FIRETRUCK (Other) by Garrett S Sexton
Little Stevie john George loved the fire truck. Hoped to be a fireman,but glass collecting in a bingo hall got stuck. Balding,fat and lonley,at 21 he despaired. Then one night he fell in love with 50 year old mare. His lack of personality only made it last a year. She blamed it on the age gap,but it was the mechanic in the flat down stairs. At least she had bore him a child. He smiled. I will live my dreams through him. Little Stevie john george loves the fire truck. Hoped to be a fireman,but glass collecting in a bing hall got stuck.

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Overall Rank: 11371
Posted: March 1, 2003 1:06 AM PST; Last modified: March 1, 2003 1:06 AM PST
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[7] OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.3 | 1-Mar-03/1:17 AM | Reply
50? Uch! Good poem but that's gross. Some one better warn the mechanic.
[6] Mr Pig @ 195.92.194.17 | 1-Mar-03/10:17 AM | Reply
You've not quite grasped this, One thinks you should adapt it as a limerick, a nice idea but what the Dickens are you trying to say?
Turn Back Dick Whittington. -6
[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 1-Mar-03/7:35 PM | Reply
Self~Portraits are always moving, at least to me.

Your second bingo came out only a bing which just won't do. we on;y drink orange bang.
[7] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 2-Apr-03/5:19 AM | Reply
Cool Ending
[8] lunar @ 195.92.67.67 | 9-Apr-03/7:59 AM | Reply
I dont get it
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