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FIRETRUCK

by Garrett S Sexton

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 Mar 2003 · 5 comments

Little Stevie john George loved the fire truck. Hoped to be a fireman,but glass collecting in a bingo hall got stuck. Balding,fat and lonley,at 21 he despaired. Then one night he fell in love with 50 year old mare. His lack of personality only made it last a year. She blamed it on the age gap,but it was the mechanic in the flat down stairs. At least she had bore him a child. He smiled. I will live my dreams through him. Little Stevie john george loves the fire truck. Hoped to be a fireman,but glass collecting in a bing hall got stuck.

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5 comments

[7] OneFingerAnswer 1-Mar-03/1:17 AM Reply
50? Uch! Good poem but that's gross. Some one better warn the mechanic.
[6] Mr Pig 1-Mar-03/10:17 AM Reply
You've not quite grasped this, One thinks you should adapt it as a limerick, a nice idea but what the Dickens are you trying to say?
Turn Back Dick Whittington. -6
[8] horus8 1-Mar-03/7:35 PM Reply
Self~Portraits are always moving, at least to me.

Your second bingo came out only a bing which just won't do. we on;y drink orange bang.
[7] Caducus 2-Apr-03/5:19 AM Reply
Cool Ending
[8] lunar 9-Apr-03/7:59 AM Reply
I dont get it