Replying to a comment on:

FIRETRUCK (Other) by Garrett S Sexton

Little Stevie john George loved the fire truck. Hoped to be a fireman,but glass collecting in a bingo hall got stuck. Balding,fat and lonley,at 21 he despaired. Then one night he fell in love with 50 year old mare. His lack of personality only made it last a year. She blamed it on the age gap,but it was the mechanic in the flat down stairs. At least she had bore him a child. He smiled. I will live my dreams through him. Little Stevie john george loves the fire truck. Hoped to be a fireman,but glass collecting in a bing hall got stuck.

Mr Pig 1-Mar-03/10:17 AM
You've not quite grasped this, One thinks you should adapt it as a limerick, a nice idea but what the Dickens are you trying to say?
Turn Back Dick Whittington. -6




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001