Re: Last Night’s Dream (Freud-o-riffic) by razorgrin	4-Apr-03/3:53 PM
Eat less junk food.
Re: Prayer for Peace by razorgrin	4-Apr-03/3:50 PM
What War???
Re: a comment on We The People by thepinkbunnyofdoom	2-Apr-03/5:52 PM
Alrighty then. Thanks for your opinion D.A. and your right I'm not disabled(other than mentally and as the above clearly defines Thats not good enough) and It wouldn't change my view point what so ever.
Re: a comment on We The People by thepinkbunnyofdoom	2-Apr-03/1:46 PM
Oh. Yeah. To be honest I just wanted to play around With the edges of the screen. I could care less about the War really. It doesn't involve anyone close to me and barely affects me to date. Glad you like it tho.
Re: a comment on Day to Day by thepinkbunnyofdoom	2-Apr-03/1:38 PM
I'm trying to go with more medifores instead of just emoting all the time. I'm still working on this one tho cause I think that the meaning is just a little too deeply buried get thru.
Re: a comment on Day to Day by thepinkbunnyofdoom	29-Mar-03/2:01 PM
Thank you very much The Caps. are just the first center and last word. I'll give it a title when I finish it but I like your Idea.
Re: Guitar Lesson by Dancer	29-Mar-03/8:06 AM
Good Times, Good Times
Re: dazed by nolan	29-Mar-03/8:03 AM
Wasn't expecting the ending. You slipped that one right past me. Though it makes sense. -9-
Re: sorry, but i am lame by nolan	29-Mar-03/7:59 AM
Hmmm... Amazingly not too lame. In fact I ratter liked it. -9-
Re: Distant at best by Crakyamuni	29-Mar-03/7:55 AM
Huh? If? Wha? Nevermind confused. It seems to make sense to me but something is nagging at me about it. -10- till I figure out what it is(that could take awhile) :)
Re: Red Skies and Thunderflies by intheailse	29-Mar-03/7:50 AM
Alright Lyrics -7-
Re: Is This Love by intheailse	29-Mar-03/7:47 AM
Oh dear child. I had hoped I'd never have to explain this to anyone ever again. Its not love if you have to ask!! Not to mention you give no detail, nadda, none. This is for all intents and purposes a look at the thoughts inside a teenage adolesant mind. Your giving us shallow thoughts with nothing to base them on. No concept of a landscape inside your head or much less of the world around you. If this isn't the worst poem ever written I'll bet its close. -0-
Re: Perversions 7: Viva Las Naked by razorgrin	29-Mar-03/7:37 AM
Glad your working on new peversions but... I agree these aren't your best but I realise it must be a hard to come up unusal fetishes and five line ways to describe them. -8- P.S. I know someone who can do the last one. He says it gives him a cramp in the neck.
Re: a comment on Iterated Fuck by nentwined	29-Mar-03/7:09 AM
Your right. I was just looking at Exit most quiveringly Clean, and the Tunnel of Worm. I'm used to calling my bum an exit only and Do Not Enter. The Tunnel of Worm <-combined with the exit remark, Tape worms being defecated, and the fact that your fecal matter slowly crawls thru your body like a worm. I comepletely missed clit-feeding. My mistake.
Re: One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined	27-Mar-03/5:31 PM
Tick Tock Tick Tock, The Ever Running Clock At the chime It will be 7 o'clock
Re: with no words to write (v2) by nentwined	27-Mar-03/5:17 PM
eh? Why not -6-
Re: Iterated Fuck by nentwined	27-Mar-03/5:15 PM
Ewww... I never I should have quit reading after the sex but no I thought there will be more sex and then I was like sweet a blow job but then Curiousity got the best of me Anal Ewww... this would be a 60 rounded down to 10 cause there is nothing higher than a 10 but you just lost 51 points for anal enjoy your 9
Re: you will feel by nentwined	27-Mar-03/5:02 PM
I must say I thought that was going to be good just from your first line but nope. Not really sure what went wrong but it ended up a trainwreck. -3-
Re: One More Mile by marvelis	25-Mar-03/7:20 PM
Marvelis you my be but I still doubt your Divinty -7-
Re: A Love Story For The Dead by Caducus	25-Mar-03/2:44 PM
Profound and thought provoking. Excellent -10-