| Re: a comment on a Waste of Space by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
17-Jul-03/2:59 AM |
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Well thats what it should have been, but apparently not.
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| Re: thought & memory by Bill Z Bub |
14-Jul-03/4:24 PM |
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This tickles the little hampster running on a wheel in my brain's nut sack. -10-
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| Re: walking by Rodavlas |
14-Jul-03/4:18 PM |
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| Re: a comment on The Umpteenth Home by EAger to Offend |
14-Jul-03/4:16 PM |
Here is my rewrite
When I was born,
a child only dreamed of,
mearly a lust that couldn't be filled,
that dream was forgotten when I was brought into this world
I was loved before and even more after I was born, Again
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| Re: Wanksta by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
14-Jul-03/9:30 AM |
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| Re: The Umpteenth Home by EAger to Offend |
14-Jul-03/9:27 AM |
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Vague poem, I like the second line alot. -8-
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| Re: a comment on TBPOD Speaks by King Abdullah II |
13-Jul-03/1:22 PM |
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Hahahaha, Make your own guesses, As for me I have no doubt what-so-ever who this is. If I didn't already worship them secretly in my closet(Which has been converted into a shine to this noble noble being), I would build one. In cause you can't tell He has taken one of my xanga entires and rewritten it to be Funnier than a Gay Man locked in a sexual paradise for the straight.
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| Re: How To Make Up Without Saying I'm Sorry by OnTheOtherHand |
11-Jul-03/9:36 AM |
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I think pissing you off was his point. He lives for it. Good Vilanelle by the way. -9-
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| Re: Broken by OnTheOtherHand |
11-Jul-03/9:30 AM |
Touching, but lacks enough expression of rage and anger to go with all the broken things. -8-
P.S. Frasor Allonby, your former cellmate says next time you say he forced you to eat your own shit, He'll make you eat his as well.
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| Re: On A Night Like This by bazz |
10-Jul-03/6:27 PM |
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Have you ever heard of banal me lad? Look it up cause this is a great example.
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| Re: a comment on TPBOD Joins a pack of wolves by Luzr |
10-Jul-03/12:26 PM |
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Its not Movie material, but I like it.
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| Re: a comment on TPBOD Joins a pack of wolves by Luzr |
10-Jul-03/12:24 PM |
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| Re: Musehearts Swimming Lessons by DreamerSupreme |
9-Jul-03/11:50 AM |
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You make alot of friends fast don't you. Very good poem by the way. -10-
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| Re: a comment on My BPD vs Yours by OneFingerAnswer |
9-Jul-03/11:36 AM |
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Hey I mearly called you a cyborg regaining humanity, which you do have to admit, with your writing style and your DMTR thingy, You are a machine. Please Disect and reassemble my username next?
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| Re: Everyone thinks I'm Settle by King Abdullah II |
8-Jul-03/1:29 PM |
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Poor you.. I pity your pain, for being mistaken as one of the best poets, on the ranker. How sad.
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| Re: My Ass Bag by King Abdullah I |
8-Jul-03/1:21 PM |
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Wow. I'm impressed by the author's note. Well done, and very informative. You deserve a Maturity Harness... Oh Yeah we don't have any of those. Well here since I couldn't offer one of those, have a D.A. style ten. -=1_0=-. ;)
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| Re: SupremeDreamer by King Abdullah I |
8-Jul-03/1:09 PM |
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Whats sad is I'm amused by this.
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| Re: a comment on Priceless Moment by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
8-Jul-03/12:46 PM |
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Yeah, but hey! Its legal in canada(at least thats what I heard anyway.) If only the Bush would do something useful and make it legal... Til then its Tokin in the basement, for me.
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| Re: a comment on Priceless Moment by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
8-Jul-03/12:42 PM |
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Awe... Your such a sweetie pie.
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| Re: a comment on Priceless Moment by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
8-Jul-03/12:39 PM |
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It was more for Horus8's(or any other serious poet's) reaction of WTF. I know its not a Haiku, But I'm not ready to add to it yet, but Don't worry I will(Eventually).
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