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On A Night Like This (Free verse) by bazz
On a night like this I held her in my arms
She's no longer here, we're no longer the same
Under the infinite sky we gazed upon stars
Stars that twinkle, as our love fades away
Stars; diamonds that glitter across the curtain of night
Maybe she's admiring the same stars, in someone else's arms
On a night like this my heart yearns for her
My voice searches for her, my hand longing her caress
My tears carry in them visions of her
My soul wanders and is lost without her
Why was the love that we had, so short?
And the oblivion that I'm in, so long?
On a night like this I miss her immensely
I no longer love her, but perhaps I still do
But someone else's, she's now someone else's
As she once belonged to my kisses
I pray that this is the last pain she'll cause me
As I hope these are the last words I'll write for her
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10054
Posted: July 10, 2003 4:15 PM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2003 4:15 PM PDT
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