Re: a comment on Vodka, An ex-girlfriend, and a mess by Luzr	20-Jul-03/6:21 PM
Obviously
Re: a comment on Vodka, An ex-girlfriend, and a mess by Luzr	20-Jul-03/6:21 PM
If you do just make sure to let me know where to download it.
Re: The first time in forever by Jeremi B. Handrinos	20-Jul-03/5:26 PM
Wow. Just when I think you can't shock me anymore *BLAM*. Nice.
Re: a comment on Vodka, An ex-girlfriend, and a mess by Luzr	20-Jul-03/5:23 PM
Hangover? I'm just lucky I don't get them, Cause from what I saw this morning, they are worse than being a man at a PMS convention.
Re: a comment on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom	20-Jul-03/3:43 PM
Hmm.. Meta-poetry. I thought that was a trend started late 18th century that died out til about the early 20th century and something entirely different, but As you will my Grace, But lets take it a step even further. I thought about writing poems about writing poems about writing poetry, But then again that seemed a bit foolish to me For shortly there after a messenger of GOD came and pronounced it shit So I said fuck it and Quit
Re: a comment on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom	20-Jul-03/1:07 AM
I apologise, I'm sorry, I'm really really drunk and I have 8 people at my house naked(Only two of them female sadly enough). I have no clue what that has to do with anything other than me being naked drunk and sorry. Can you forgive me?
Re: a comment on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom	20-Jul-03/1:05 AM
True that, True that, I'm sorry, I've just been incredibly drunk these past few days. Well drunk or stoned but either way, I'm sorry. My bad, Party Fowl on me.
Re: a comment on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom	20-Jul-03/12:47 AM
So was I. I think I'm pretty good at rewrites. Local Band, Very Kickass.
Re: a comment on Fucking A!?!? by thepinkbunnyofdoom	20-Jul-03/12:46 AM
Well duh?
Re: a comment on Joe is Dead Now by Freethinker1602	20-Jul-03/12:45 AM
Okay I was refering to the poem, not to me. Make it apparent in your writing not in commentary. Side comments mean nothing as a poet, its the body of the poem that matters.
Re: a comment on Fucking B by A sad syrupless Waffel by horus8	19-Jul-03/4:50 PM
Really, I've been looking for a new mouthwash, and I get to break my windows!! What a bonus!!
Re: Fucking B by A sad syrupless Waffel by horus8	19-Jul-03/3:39 PM
LMMFAO!!! I was only hoping for a Comment on the poem, not a whole poem! Props. JB, You made my day. -10-
Re: Death Wish by Kitch	19-Jul-03/2:59 PM
Wow.. You do suck. I mean even at sucking. This is merely Mediocore. Not good, not bad. Just there.
Re: a comment on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom	19-Jul-03/2:54 PM
Oh I realise that you don't feel I'm among the top ten poets here. Thats my opinion not yours(As you'd say blowing smoke up my own ass). Still I'm more poetic than you'll ever give me credit for being. Just a statement. Not meant to be offensive, just stated.
Re: Tears and Tombstones by OnTheOtherHand	19-Jul-03/2:50 PM
Excellent writing. -10-
Re: Joe is Dead Now by Freethinker1602	19-Jul-03/2:46 PM
Touching, but more details please. Why is this Joe So important to you, Who the hell is he? That type of stuff.
Re: a comment on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom	19-Jul-03/2:29 PM
Only if its breaded first, and you bring the special brownies for dessert.
Re: a comment on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom	19-Jul-03/2:03 PM
Maybe its... Cuz, I can't seem to wake up Stuck in a state of dazzling daydreams Could be I'm so fucked up From all the bud I've been blazing Or the lack there of Stuck in my lungs I don't think your in the same state of mind But yeah our locations aren't far apart By the way, Have you ever heard of a band called the Random Heros?
Re: a comment on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom	19-Jul-03/1:57 PM
I'm currently needing a detox, Right now my mind is so blurred that thoughts and Ideas make no sense to me, and I'm feeling paranoid. Paranoiya and my writing are not really good friends.
Re: a comment on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom	19-Jul-03/1:51 PM
This coming from the False Apollo? I'm still more poetic than you'll ever give me credit for.