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Vodka, An ex-girlfriend, and a mess (Lyric) by Luzr
Woke up Sometime around 5 til 9 Found vomit in my bed But it wasn't mine She's lying naked Piss drunk on my floor Screaming I can't take this anymore I'm on fire I'm slipping between worlds I can't take this Oh look what I have become Shes just lying there Crying Tequilla tears Shouting loud enough for the dead to hear I can't take this My guts are flaming gasoline And I can't see straight I swere I'm never drinking again So shes just lying there Crying Tequilla tears While I'm still sitting here Listening to her whine in my ear Telling how drinking is bad How its never made her anything but sad And crying crocodile Tequilla tears So it looks like I'm the one cleaning up here

Down the ladder: Entropy

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.4615383
Weighted score: 6.7995286
Overall Rank: 457
Posted: July 20, 2003 4:19 PM PDT; Last modified: July 20, 2003 4:19 PM PDT
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[8] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.177.56 | 20-Jul-03/4:53 PM | Reply
hey hey, nothin like a hangover to snap you out of writers block. 8
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 > SupremeDreamer | 20-Jul-03/5:23 PM | Reply
Hangover? I'm just lucky I don't get them, Cause from what I saw this morning, they are worse than being a man at a PMS convention.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.67.94 > thepinkbunnyofdoom | 20-Jul-03/6:04 PM | Reply
Don't get hangovers? Obviously you've never woken up with your face in a tramp's crapping arse.
Perhaps, he's not living a life at waist level and into sticking his head up someone's ass while getting his drink on?
Obviously
[7] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 20-Jul-03/6:19 PM | Reply
I rather enjoyed, maybe, I'll make it a song.
If you do just make sure to let me know where to download it.
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