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Vodka, An ex-girlfriend, and a mess (Lyric) by Luzr

Woke up Sometime around 5 til 9 Found vomit in my bed But it wasn't mine She's lying naked Piss drunk on my floor Screaming I can't take this anymore I'm on fire I'm slipping between worlds I can't take this Oh look what I have become Shes just lying there Crying Tequilla tears Shouting loud enough for the dead to hear I can't take this My guts are flaming gasoline And I can't see straight I swere I'm never drinking again So shes just lying there Crying Tequilla tears While I'm still sitting here Listening to her whine in my ear Telling how drinking is bad How its never made her anything but sad And crying crocodile Tequilla tears So it looks like I'm the one cleaning up here

thepinkbunnyofdoom 20-Jul-03/6:21 PM
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