Re: Your Mom, My Dad by jessicazee	27-Apr-05/10:23 PM
The line breaks could be better.
Re: Somehow, Hope by DeadtotheWorld	27-Apr-05/10:11 PM
I have to wonder, what the hell were you smoking? I can't even begin to tell you all the things that irritated me about this. Try not to use the same words repeatedly(Like 'many' for one example, there are plenty of other words that mean the exact same thing). I liked what I thought you were trying to get at here, but I hated how you tried to get there. -4-
Re: am i right? by celticskatermatt1	27-Apr-05/9:55 PM
Okay, a tip about poetry. Write like your on crack and seeing funny shit. In other words be inventive.
Re: spiritual living by mystic enoch	27-Apr-05/9:31 PM
"life changes, love doesn't." Think of how things sound if you read aloud. Didn't affect my vote, but I thought I'd mention it. -7-
Re: a comment on I do... Not! by Billy Fights	27-Apr-05/9:27 PM
Guitar, Bass, and Drums. I'm best at Guitar considering that I don't own any of the others. I'm currently working on my classical acoustic. <3 Jason
Re: a comment on This one the love by thepinkbunnyofdoom	26-Apr-05/7:47 PM
I merely said I saw how you got that Idea. Not that you were right.
Re: a comment on All You Need Is Gloves by -=DIABETES=-	26-Apr-05/1:06 AM
How about I don't remember either of them. Never liked more than one or two Dave Matthews songs, and I was burnt out on the bettles by the time I was 10. I thought you should have kept the "have you read" comment. It was better and would have been more fun to respond to.
Re: a comment on This one the love by thepinkbunnyofdoom	26-Apr-05/1:01 AM
Ever look at the vote details? Look at anything I've posted in the last two years. You'll find no votes for myself. Before that, Eh? Yeah, so what of it. The writings from before then are just as bad as any of the current ranker toddlers. I don't give myself votes anymore, and I tend to avoid using my other usernames to vote or comment. So what the fuck are you smoking?
Re: a comment on This one the love by thepinkbunnyofdoom	25-Apr-05/10:21 AM
Then vote, or stop wasting people's time. A.D.D. is a bitch I know, but really. You might as well not even waste time reading poetry if you're not going to offer an intellectual output of some sort afterwards, or vote.
Re: a comment on Antique by Billy Fights	25-Apr-05/10:15 AM
Yes. "A weapon of war no longer needed" coupled with the title. Why a morningstar you might ask? Because it is an extention of reach, and force. Why wouldn't a sword be just as effective? Swords are cliche, and/or he didn't view himself as a piercing weapon. A morningstar is consider a blunt weapon. Hard hitting and only deadly in the right hands. <3 Jason
Re: a comment on Antique by Billy Fights	24-Apr-05/5:32 PM
Also called a morgenstern (German for morning star) and a ball and chain mace. The morningstar was virtually identical to the ball and chain mace, the only difference being that a morningstar always had a spiked ball for striking. Like the ball and chain, the morningstar consisted of a metal ball attached by a chain to a wood or metal handle. By extending the weapon’s center of gravity far from the hand, the wielder created a great deal of momentum in a swing. The increased force of impact upon the target was devastatingly effective against armored and unarmored opponents alike.
Re: a comment on This one the love by thepinkbunnyofdoom	24-Apr-05/5:08 PM
Since when did it become custom, merely to reply to comments, as opposed to voting yourself?
Re: a comment on This one the love by thepinkbunnyofdoom	24-Apr-05/5:06 PM
I see how you got the Idea that this was about "Love" the concept, and not "Love" the affectionate title for someone you love.
Re: a comment on All You Need Is Gloves by -=DIABETES=-	24-Apr-05/10:26 AM
Factory instead of 'manufacturer', and say fuck you to anyone who thinks there should be meaning behind this. We both know it's parody(I swear I've heard "All you need is love, love, love" somewhere, but I have a memory condition known as Chronic Herbtimers which makes me kind of forgetful). Any further modification should come from comparison to the original, and your own voice. Try a messed up Karaoke, and see what you think. Gloves are much more important than love. Would you rather your surgeon have love on his hands, or gloves? Love is a chemical, straight from the genitals. Only as important as we make it. Needless to say twits since the dawn of time, like myself, have made it seem pretty damn important. We're such bastards. <3 Jason
Re: Prickly Pear by Dovina	23-Apr-05/11:45 PM
Simple, but good. Athough you description of the defense is a little lite for my taste. It's a struggle for life, via conservative nature. If this isn't about a Cactus(at least somewhat), sorry for being stupid. <3 Jason
Re: All You Need Is Gloves by -=DIABETES=-	23-Apr-05/11:29 PM
No glove, no love. This needs some sex. I mean good, hard, 30 minute(because the hooker charges by the hour and it took about 25 minutes to get there) sex. Seriously though, "manufacturer", just doesn't work with how I'm reading this. Not to mention the fact that I was a little bored, and hoping either more lewd, or better writing from a -=_=-, even minus the _.
Re: Gaping Hole by sonawrote	22-Apr-05/1:47 AM
A touch repetive, but I easily connected with this.
Re: a comment on A new leaf by Damien	22-Apr-05/1:41 AM
Aw! But good sir, let us not forget the minstrel whom has fought for his crown, Horus8.
Re: f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_	19-Apr-05/12:01 AM
Seriously. Why do you censor yourself? What is the point of it? Censorship just seem like one of the rules you've some how retained I guess. You had me for awhile, before I got bored by shear length, and subject matter that I felt was being beat overly to death. Yes, it's okay to slam multiple poets in one post, No, it's not okay to slam multiple poets in one post given the amount of time, and the aforementioned droning subject. Ambition is a good thing to have. Eye strain however, sucks for poetry. -7- Because I liked alot of it. I just thought there was way too much of it.
Re: We Were Burnouts by jessicazee	18-Apr-05/11:16 AM
I'm just going to be worthless and say I enjoyed this. <3 Jason