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I do... Not! (Free verse) by Billy Fights
The greatest mystery That there will ever be Is how you can say you love me But don't want to be with me I'm sorry if I can't comprehend The message you're trying to send All because I can remember when My knee touched your floor And you kissed me hard Before your answer The one thing I want to know Is what changed to make it so That yes came to mean no
Up the ladder: You and I
Down the ladder: If When We Die
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5668
Posted: April 26, 2005 7:41 PM PDT; Last modified: April 26, 2005 7:41 PM PDT
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[9] jessicazee @ 152.163.100.135 | 27-Apr-05/1:02 AM | Reply
Great song lyrics. Do you play an instrument? 9
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 4.224.24.61 > jessicazee | 27-Apr-05/9:27 PM | Reply
Guitar, Bass, and Drums. I'm best at Guitar considering that I don't own any of the others. I'm currently working on my classical acoustic.

<3 Jason
[10] zodiac @ 213.186.171.241 | 27-Apr-05/6:27 AM | Reply
Hey, great title!
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