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Free verse № 124090

spiritual living

Member since 2005 · Posted 26 Apr 2005 · 1 comment

S secret love pats shared between us two, nonverbal personal jokes. P parents teaching us life lessons, without speaking a single word. I independence given to us, even though in your mind you feel sheltered. R rituals done everyday, life changes love doesn't. I intuition about things yet to come, everyone knows except you. T together even in physical death, we never part. voices in the back of your mind. U unity at home, though seeming divided. A apple for the teacher in exchange for lessons that last a lifetime. L life, flesh from flesh and god gives us breath that's what I call spiritual living.

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[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom 27-Apr-05/9:31 PM Reply
"life changes, love doesn't." Think of how things sound if you read aloud. Didn't affect my vote, but I thought I'd mention it. -7-