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spiritual living (Free verse) by mystic enoch
S secret love pats shared between us two,
nonverbal personal jokes.
P parents teaching us life lessons,
without speaking a single word.
I independence given to us,
even though in your mind you feel sheltered.
R rituals done everyday,
life changes love doesn't.
I intuition about things yet to come,
everyone knows except you.
T together even in physical death,
we never part.
voices in the back of your mind.
U unity at home,
though seeming divided.
A apple for the teacher in exchange
for lessons that last a lifetime.
L life, flesh from flesh and god gives us breath
that's what I call spiritual living.
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Posted: April 26, 2005 10:49 AM PDT; Last modified: April 26, 2005 10:49 AM PDT
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