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Welcome to my life (Free verse) by ShelliAnne
1=>Welcome to the story of my life Always bored , always pending on the weather in my house , always cloudy and I cant ever seem to find the sun .. B=> Welcome to the story of my life .. la la la la la la . na na na na na na na na 2=> Im clueless and I cant take this anymore , what if I found the sun tomorrow would I leave you all behind ? never ever beause this is the story of my life .. la la la la la la . na na na na na na na na 3=> I promise I will find the sun today .. na na na na na laaaaala , I going to that mountain im gonna blow these clouds away .. la la la la la na na na na cauce id do anything for you .. B=> Welcome to the story of my life .. la la la la la la . na na na na na na na na

Up the ladder: Man Enough For Me
Down the ladder: Freedom

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Weighted score: 4.904638
Overall Rank: 9849
Posted: November 28, 2003 11:26 AM PST; Last modified: November 28, 2003 11:26 AM PST
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[10] Aliangel114 @ 162.84.163.188 | 28-Nov-03/11:34 AM | Reply
The lyrics themselves are good, but the la la las, and the na na nas, arnt very necassary. Otherwise good job - 10
[6] deleted user @ 24.168.66.247 > Aliangel114 | 29-Nov-03/12:50 PM | Reply
how could a poem have something unnecASSary and get a perfect score? -6-
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