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Welcome to my life (Free verse) by ShelliAnne

1=>Welcome to the story of my life Always bored , always pending on the weather in my house , always cloudy and I cant ever seem to find the sun .. B=> Welcome to the story of my life .. la la la la la la . na na na na na na na na 2=> Im clueless and I cant take this anymore , what if I found the sun tomorrow would I leave you all behind ? never ever beause this is the story of my life .. la la la la la la . na na na na na na na na 3=> I promise I will find the sun today .. na na na na na laaaaala , I going to that mountain im gonna blow these clouds away .. la la la la la na na na na cauce id do anything for you .. B=> Welcome to the story of my life .. la la la la la la . na na na na na na na na

Aliangel114 28-Nov-03/11:34 AM
The lyrics themselves are good, but the la la las, and the na na nas, arnt very necassary. Otherwise good job - 10




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