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This one the love (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
Underneath the streetlights I sang songs of sorrow
Telling of tomorrows that never came and autumn nights
I was prepared for a battle of rusty switchblade symphonies
Should have known, youâd run from this silent war
Always a step ahead, always two steps behind
One day I will corner you, and itâll be an epic
The likes of which none shall ever know
Love, what have you done?
Retreat equals defeat, so stand tall
Raise your banner, because here I come
This will kill one of us, but Iâm already dying
Answer my questions, or face the executioner
Axe in hand, this will end
The element of surprise was always your grace
You kept none of my secrets as such
But all was forgiven in the majesty of your touch
Now you bare only this one against me
Your weapon of choice is a poor one
This dual can only end in bloodshed
One of us lying face down on the concrete
The other a murder, broken and cold
Love, what have you done?
Words are weapons, as is the lack of them
So Iâll bow before we strike the first blows
To hide my face one last time in shadow
Your toxins, as potent as they are useless
Unless you can get close again
Love, what have you done?
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.3333335
Weighted score: 5.62753
Overall Rank: 2206
Posted: April 23, 2005 11:32 PM PDT; Last modified: April 23, 2005 11:36 PM PDT
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Incidentally, I'm posting a poem on the topic. Will you please take a look?
I will if you will.
And besides, I'm married.
Actually, the poem comes from the Negro conversation. If it's impossible for whites to write about blacks fairly, it ought to be impossible for me to write about women fairly. Don't you think?