Re: Dictionary Magic Test Results (DMTR) by DreamerSupreme |
9-Jul-03/1:48 AM |
That's fun. If you don't mind I'd like to see you play with this and see what comes for my name.
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Re: a comment on My BPD vs Yours by OneFingerAnswer |
9-Jul-03/1:44 AM |
No I'm not talking about dog shit that cares. The one belongs after the some though. Thanks for the catch.
If you have AIM go press Ctrl + 6 in a message window and you'll get a present from me to you.
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Re: a comment on Hi, my name is "Look at me, Stop it!" I'm Bi-polar by horus8 |
8-Jul-03/11:44 PM |
Dear Museheart,
Look fucker. I wasn't pushing you at all. I was just saying that there's a less major form of bi-polar disorder that does have mood swings as rapid as what the poem describes. Manic-depressive disorder doesn't even exist any more. The title is bi-polar disorder.
Do I care about someone I push over the brink? Of fucking course I do. Look at my poems and you'll see how much I care about hurting others.
Do I care about someone I wasn't talking to and have never even heard of takes offence to me giving out information about a mental disorder? Of fucking course I don't. If I had nothing to do with it then I'm not going to waste time feeling guilty about it.
Get the fuck off me with your MDD shit. I myself have B-PD and I'm not up to listening to you bitch when I wasn't even talking to or about you. I was replying to a response to a poem. Neither of which mention you. Take your baggage else where cause I'm not having it.
Sincerly, fuck you,
OneFingerAnswer
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Re: a comment on One Lump Or Two? by OneFingerAnswer |
6-Jul-03/5:53 PM |
No :( And I'm starting to hate this shit.
Why is that whenever I look at a poem and go back and change something it fucks everything to hell?
*Edits (again)*
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Re: The Zen of the Pen by DreamerSupreme |
6-Jul-03/2:54 PM |
"What good is a pen, if one knows not how to write?"
I've used pens for a lot of things other than writing.
Whistles to weapons the possiblities never end.
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Re: a comment on 2838 Denise Dr. Troy, Mi. by Bachus |
6-Jul-03/2:48 PM |
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Re: 12673 Jalepeno ave. Chino, Ca. by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
6-Jul-03/2:48 PM |
I like this the best out of the series. Keep going by all means.
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Re: a comment on 2838 Denise Dr. Troy, Mi. by Bachus |
6-Jul-03/2:44 PM |
He shot the squirrel not the dog.
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Re: a comment on Rude Awakenings by OneFingerAnswer |
5-Jul-03/11:52 PM |
With your name figures you'd like it. Thanks.
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Re: a comment on Hi, my name is "Look at me, Stop it!" I'm Bi-polar by horus8 |
5-Jul-03/4:16 PM |
Could be cyclothymic disorder. Shorter, less severe episodes like those of bi-polar disorder.
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Re: a comment on Herne by OneFingerAnswer |
29-Jun-03/2:00 PM |
I don't know what happened... I had a word after bottom.... I'll have to fix that
And a bay is a kind of horse. Auburn with a black mane I think.
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Re: a comment on The Shoulder War by Kitch |
28-Jun-03/2:34 PM |
I agree.
I also think the rhythm in the jelly line is a little off. If you keep it try "and I turn.." It might fix it.
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Re: Creating A Bitch by Kitch |
28-Jun-03/2:30 PM |
Nothing you want me to hear I can say.
I don't get that line. Maybe something like:
What you want to hear isn't what I have to say
The last half of the 3rd stanza seems a little muddled too.
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Re: The Errant Knight by Thyme |
27-Jun-03/1:11 AM |
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Re: On Someone's Dick by JoyLuck |
26-Jun-03/11:30 PM |
I think the l;ast line could use a hor at the end. You messed up the curve of his balls.
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Re: a comment on The Twenty-Fifth of Whenevber by OneFingerAnswer |
26-Jun-03/9:22 PM |
I don't perform my poetry. It's not anonymous enough. I prefer to hide behind firewalls.
Actually I wasn't happy with that line either but it was pissing me off so I left it. After reading it with your version in.... Thanks.
One little word, huh?
Well that's the beauty and the
butt of poetry
Look a haiku.
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Re: -=Dark_Angel_Is_No_Longer_Funny=- by wEdible Underpantsw |
26-Jun-03/6:08 PM |
I never found him to be funny. Chalk it up to creative differences
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Re: a comment on The Twenty-Fifth of Whenevber by OneFingerAnswer |
26-Jun-03/6:07 PM |
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Re: a comment on The Twenty-Fifth of Whenevber by OneFingerAnswer |
26-Jun-03/5:24 PM |
I thought about it and I think I like the v more. Ode? Really? Ok. I'm not too good with the styles any way.
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Re: a comment on The Twenty-Fifth of Whenevber by OneFingerAnswer |
26-Jun-03/8:49 AM |
Whenevber isn't a typo. It's a created month. A combination of the ending of the last few months of the year and whenever. I don't know when I'll finally get the courage up to go. Til is a word. I feel that people say it instead of until often enough that I need not bother with the apostrophe.
The other typo, thanks.
I'll consider punctuation in a bit
I don't mind the proofread. I actually like to have it addressed early. I still think you're putting too much focus on him though. Although he was a great guy and I still love him I've come to terms with his death. It might seem cold but I have. This is about the taking care of myself part of it. I do generally but this is one area that has been hard for me to deal with.
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