Re: The Chastisement of Cupid by Thyme	20-Jan-03/2:13 PM
Yes, harder! old man, you understand not the mind of the dominant submissive..get to the end of the line. Next!
Re: she was a garden of roses by crin	18-Jan-03/11:49 AM
"steel resolve" 'thorny resolve' might work better...some how the 'steel' image does not fit, and what would a rose poem be without thorns...que no?
Re: Who Flamed Roger Rabbit? by poemwanker	18-Jan-03/11:32 AM
"yer?" should be 'er' or yers forcing you to then go with butchers, which actually would make this better...i enjoyed it mostly. a funny ditty and witty but not like a three holed titty splittied six ways.
Re: blues by <~>	18-Jan-03/11:22 AM
Bulls-eye.
Re: a comment on blues by <~>	18-Jan-03/11:21 AM
No, yes. yes.
Re: 2 from 6 by INTRANSIT	18-Jan-03/11:13 AM
Ahhhh ha ha ha...you're insane! i haVE ABSOLutely no clue as to what in the hell this is about and it's right there in front of me... nice curve ball.
Re: a comment on Mommy, why does -=DarkAngel=- use 'an' so much? by <{Baba^Yaga}>	15-Jan-03/3:43 PM
You'll get a kick out of this. http://knowingpoe.thinkport.org/default_flash.asp they should call it 'knowing toe" the life and times of poe jam. lol.
Re: a comment on The shirt I wore to dinner. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	15-Jan-03/3:31 PM
That blows! my favorite is fresh water eel. spinach with peanuts, and torro from yellowfin. All of course with hot saki, wasibi, and plenty of ginger with clam miso soup, white or red. Plus a tall beer to wash it all down with.red snapper and spanish mackeral worksd too, fuckit the halibut was no slouch either...ah hell. It's all good. MIFUNE RULES!
Re: On Wanting to Know The Truth by dougsoderstrom	15-Jan-03/1:14 PM
What kind of haiku is this?
Re: a comment on The blue light special. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	15-Jan-03/1:12 PM
No, Accura auditions defy reality. I was merely working the extra kale I have laying around with old manelli records and david gest interviews.
Re: a comment on The blue light special. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	15-Jan-03/1:08 PM
The guidelines? You are are entitled to your opinion, and it is noted, but I am to busy currently to argue your belief in limitations created by guidelines, and if you assume that I do not know, or cannot, write a guidelined limerick than so be it.
Re: a comment on Bobjim, Jimbob by Spider-Man	15-Jan-03/10:37 AM
he went jim, Jim, jim. which is a revolutionary stroke of authenticity, you fucking pud puffer.
Re: a comment on Bobjim, Jimbob by Spider-Man	15-Jan-03/10:35 AM
No, actually we were in the middle of a fierce battle..then you strolled in going "gee guys i hope it's in good fun"? well guess what? it isn't. We actually do hate eachother, and the bullits are real, so take your walker and flask and leak (i meant leaf, but than thought hey, the first works too) identification guide over to that stump and stream yonder, could you grizzly Adam's? thanks...All right boys, let the canon fodder fod.
Re: Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin	15-Jan-03/10:20 AM
i was hoping the second one would payoff, but the third was the proof in the pudding. Zombie pudding.
Re: Thorns of Grace by smlink84	14-Jan-03/11:40 AM
die! jesus freak and a good shabbas to you!
Re: SP by Figure 8	14-Jan-03/10:46 AM
Clammy and promising.
Re: a comment on Little Tounge by Figure 8	14-Jan-03/10:35 AM
lol. The concept's strong though.t
Re: Good to the Last Drop by Bonehiss	14-Jan-03/10:33 AM
minatory. i like it. great title too.
Re: a comment on The shirt I wore to dinner. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	14-Jan-03/10:15 AM
Also, go fuck yourself. it should say poemwankeries fucking face. stupid cunt, Do you actually think I do not know how to show posession when it comes to nouns? Here, go suck Jimmy Hoffa's cock Poemwanker (notice how i properly capitalized your user name idiot))
Re: Where is My BabyGirl? by ChunkyHunkyMonkey	13-Jan-03/6:23 PM
made into vellum. your rasp is a rasp-berry.