| Re: a comment on Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
2-Feb-03/6:08 PM |
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You know what would look cute? you sucking your own cock with two japanese chefs preparing miso soup with tofu on your back as a cable t.v show we would call it <He's a poet and he knows it? see him bend for his own pleasure, it would be a comedy tragedy with a hint of drama, but not much.>
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| Re: Bein' Vegan by poetandknowit |
2-Feb-03/6:00 PM |
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Good gracious, and here was i under the impression that i should give a fuck?
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| Re: Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin |
31-Jan-03/10:55 PM |
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Oh. I see. My friend had the same problem when his toucan died.
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| Re: a comment on Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
31-Jan-03/9:40 PM |
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No, Horus8 is my real name, and Jeremi is just something i hold onto to pass the time? Darkest recesses of poemranker? that's funny... Do you mean Babbit's unexplored posterior cavity, or Settle's odiferous inner ear infection. By the way Nick, the only thing bathos about these haiku is that they're not. Come now, let's not insult one another's intelligence. I thought we were beyond our Sophmore years, and experimenting with real lab beakers and bunson burners now? I'd prefer if you'd not bore me with your epic similes and rhetorical figures in the name of tradition Nick. I am starting to get the impression that your consistant Jacobean age yammering was not a phase, but a pacifier. What? Am i not aloud a little light verse once in a while? You pian my sole Nick, you really do. CARPE DIEM DOGS!
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| Re: Mom And Dad by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
28-Jan-03/12:26 AM |
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yikes. yeah..that about says it all. you know i was going to come over here with a squad of superfiscialy intelligent fish heads and minions, and give you a pleasant berating, but then i read your poem,. and openly wept for abused 'childes' everywhere, and forget why i came...oh yeah to say well. NO-BRAINER.enjoy your time here. here's some dry turkey sole. 0. nah fuckit you apparently gave it all. granted a brick, an air ball, but what the hell. right? 2?
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| Re: a comment on Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
28-Jan-03/12:09 AM |
Point? to make you think.
Acid? do you mean Ergot?
Pureed or blended?
You should ask yourselve
how you have gotten this far
knowing so little.
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| Re: Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
27-Jan-03/4:16 PM |
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What's lovely is how this is isn't even a vilanelle, nor significant to the human condition on any level other than slightly humorus, but what the fuck it's #1 and i'm sure that counts for something, somewhere, somehow. right pinkbunnyofprune?
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| Re: winter every day (Don't bother reading this) by unknown |
27-Jan-03/4:07 PM |
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| Re: Lachrymalia by Lain |
27-Jan-03/1:44 PM |
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This poem is all over the place. A "renaissance of dust", if you will? 7.
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| Re: Emergency by Nicholas Jones |
27-Jan-03/12:02 PM |
I don't agree with nentwined here.
This is probably the best sept 11th organic attempt at lucid poetics yet..here, that is..why? because it almost isn't..get it? think about that
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| Re: Coastal Path by Nicholas Jones |
27-Jan-03/11:57 AM |
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Finished in a rush, but i rather enjoyed how it started, and the wrenchings you applied to some of your articulationso
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| Re: Nobody by Nicholas Jones |
27-Jan-03/11:51 AM |
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| Re: a comment on The Magical Hairy Chair by Nagi |
27-Jan-03/10:51 AM |
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That's pretty funny. Coming from you.
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| Re: How can you? by alainna |
26-Jan-03/6:37 PM |
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When horus was putting his father osiris back together...he purposely lost the penis..changing the universe forever. Need as dust pan?<
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| Re: Wild Child by crimzon |
26-Jan-03/6:35 PM |
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This is to poetry what the blue lagoon was to cinema?
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| Re: Together Forever by Sarahmarie |
21-Jan-03/6:43 PM |
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Sarah....I think it's time i've come clean and just told you the truth..i love you, but..well..i'm a flaming queen. Can you find it in your heart, to let me wear your underwear too.
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| Re: a comment on Head and Shoulders by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
21-Jan-03/2:01 PM |
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Ah ha. you totally got it. yeah, it's really weird, it goes with the theory..you never need or want it, until you've tried it.
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| Re: a comment on untitled (readjuster) by pomoxo |
20-Jan-03/9:38 PM |
By the way, you are a filthy wizard.
I assumed you be out running errands
for the Bio power network currently,
but lo and behold, you've graced us with your presense.
I would of guessed you'd be out recycling vegetable oil
for your countrymen's cause
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| Re: a comment on untitled (readjuster) by pomoxo |
20-Jan-03/9:32 PM |
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| Re: untitled (readjuster) by pomoxo |
20-Jan-03/8:36 PM |
Deleterious aye? Metal you say? Command? I see. Very well. Good one. Nice ending
I feel if you were to structure it like this:
The re-adjuster's come to town;
warmth collapses into my body.
I've got a shivering grin for
the evanescent sun that's flown in,
dropped by for a quick stint.
A joke it is, I'm laughing
behind my own composite,
He's tweaking me back into
the lucid rut, where I love
to glide and grudge;
the tangible flow of
yet-to-be-set concrete,
flashes of a bridge I knew,
a bridge I could have been
poured into-But, I'm static, evaporating frenetic
indentured to his land
of mirage fields that conceal deleterious metal,
and dissolute strands
of the dirt over which
I once had command
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