Together Forever

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Jan 2003 · 2 comments

Last night I had a dream I dreamt of wings I was flying Flying away from reality Away from this horrible place to somewhere unbelieveable A place where you and I could be together Together forever without the people that think we are wrong We were in our own little world-happy Then the phone rang I woke up to someone telling me you told another lie If only I could sleep forever We would stay eternally happy But instead we are stuck in this dreadful place called- Reality.

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[6] Jeremi B. Handrinos 21-Jan-03/6:43 PM Reply

Sarah....I think it's time i've come clean and just told you the truth..i love you, but..well..i'm a flaming queen. Can you find it in your heart, to let me wear your underwear too.

[7] Imperfections 21-Jan-03/11:10 PM Reply

Good work, my favorite of what I have read of yours. I like where you put "the phone rings" line, it does a good job of both dividing and connecting your thoughts.