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2 from 6 (Free verse) by INTRANSIT Dandelion Dandelion
come out and play.
If you can't play today,
I'll have to wait 'till may.
A dumb little turtle
in a dumb little shell
rolled over on his back
and blamed that he fell.
Up the ladder:
Award acceptance speach
Down the ladder:
I'll Break You Down
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Posted: January 18, 2003 7:36 AM PST; Last modified: January 18, 2003 7:36 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.5965877 Overall Rank: 12545 Comments:
Ahhhh ha ha ha...you're insane! i haVE ABSOLutely no clue as to what in the hell this is about and it's right there in front of me... nice curve ball.
What the hell are you talking about? Also, turtles are not dumb. I have a friend who has one....a lovely creature named Tutu.
2 separate poems, written when I was 6yrs old. Tortles are not dumb. When they pick up off the floor, they're quite quick. Nor are Iguanae or goldfish for that matter.
turtles, tortles, lets call the whole thing off.
'till is spelled more properly 'til (as it's short for until, not untill)
I can't say I really get either of these, or them together, nor the title. 242 view(s)
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And then read my poem 'Who Flamed Roger Rabbit', and then realise that Bobjim the bloody second has plagiarised it!