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I'll Break You Down (Free verse) by Crakyamuni
"Perfect Blue Skies," she says
A perfect fit, feelings point to yes
Why then would one stare at an empty ceiling
searching for such and such feelings
or so and so emotional reference points to collaborate
with past notions of love and loss
Why then does this waking dream not have a last name
As she swallows all or most of the current youth,
Broken perhaps?
Or is she made of the grain that dusts the weary after ----------
the 9-5?
Best not think at best, of finding more of more, less of
less
These realities have brought the salvation in past wars
Suffering indiscriminate and logical
Sometimes mytholgical
One vast and last metaphor for the moment in this Abyss
and I dared to open her wide and eager into this Void
Yes my friends-0 the consuming will persist
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Weighted score: 4.5965877
Overall Rank: 12546
Posted: March 18, 2003 9:50 AM PST; Last modified: March 18, 2003 9:50 AM PST
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