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Thorns of Grace (Free verse) by smlink84 As I lay for a time,
I saw the truth of mine
The worldly wealth of a second comming,
Only to rule out
My soul for eternal being.
Misery invites me
For a walk in the thorns,
And right beside me
Are the vanquished souls
Whom have vanished
In the abyss of self-pity.
I have been tempted
I have given in,
But he who suffered
Gives me grace.
For here I stand
Only on his land
And may he recieve Glory
Through one, not worthy.
Up the ladder:
The Eternal Center
Down the ladder:
a 9,000.00$ Philippine script treatment
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.142857
Posted: January 13, 2003 9:08 PM PST; Last modified: January 13, 2003 9:08 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.3073616 Overall Rank: 3620 Comments:
die! jesus freak and a good shabbas to you!
okay, i get the gist, but it's just....umm...weird
You seem to be a strong person. Some day we learn. Some day we yern. Yet we shall never accept what can be percieved as the only truth.
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Check line 3 as spelling error.