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blues (Haiku) by <~> tropical seas teem:
paradise awash, they seem
and then you blink
Up the ladder:
BITTER AND TWISTED
Down the ladder:
Vulgar peoples
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
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Posted: January 17, 2003 11:12 PM PST; Last modified: January 17, 2003 11:12 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.4034123 Overall Rank: 3121 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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Caducus @ 62.105.88.10
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18-Jan-03/1:31 AM
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IS this about how beautiful things appear until you take a closer look at them and your overwhelmed? or have i made a prat of myself? If not it is how it could be interpreted, my bro scitz agrees.
...and it's Exxon valdeez all over again.
I thought that you need 17 syllables in a haiku. Or am I being stupid? Can you have less?
No, yes. yes.
depends, really. some people say one thing, and others another. as such, yes and no, no and yes, and whatever. :)
some say that anything written in english can't be haiku. all the rest of the arguments stem from that, to some extent or another.
Bulls-eye.
I don't quite get this. what are they teeming with, what are they awash with?
awash me unclue-full.
emotion, salt water. eyes.
ohhhhhhhhhhhhh. hmm.
huh. 256 view(s)
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