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blues (Haiku) by <~>

tropical seas teem: paradise awash, they seem and then you blink

Caducus 18-Jan-03/1:31 AM
IS this about how beautiful things appear until you take a closer look at them and your overwhelmed? or have i made a prat of myself? If not it is how it could be interpreted, my bro scitz agrees.




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