Re: The Red Light Man by scitz	1-Mar-03/11:03 PM
That was swell.
Re: Lovers Game by scitz	1-Mar-03/11:10 PM
Michael Hutchinson Rocks!!!!!!!!!
Re: Leaving Home by temptalia	2-Mar-03/12:28 AM
Good green kelp.
Re: Tribute to the greatest ever American poem by Garrett S Sexton	2-Mar-03/12:26 PM
I think your last stanza did the splits.
Re: Knights of progress 'alter boy shamed' by Bachus	2-Mar-03/1:55 PM
If you weren't me i would rape your mouth with a skunk and a sling shot, bastard.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Mar-03/10:50 PM
"Glittorus (For Zzinia) (Free verse) by TanHand AKA the toe nail painter RE-edit of a miracle by a miracle [HORUS] RAVEN!!!!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE Vicious...I knew it WOLFWINGS SHADOWFLIGHT AND I WERE JUST >>Discussing amiga gfx lol Earth girls, are needy Their world, is breezy As my skin, is peeling It is this, I am feeling They said we were too young NO FUN DO IT DO IT DO IT RAVEN!!! Vicious??!?! KAW!! KAWW KAWW!! FLAP FLAP FLAP AMIGA GFX <><><><><><><><><> Glittorus star clustor pollox seven beep boop doop I'm a computer boop beep bop Waka waka waka 010101001010101010101010101010101 BRAINSCRATCH EARTH GIRLS Beep beep RAVEN!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! Wolfwings shadowflight Mmmm it tastes like BLOODY ROSES IN VINNEGRETTE And in the end Or gooseliver pate, which isn't a bad thing I know we tried It's just a little bit unnerving that's all Line by line SHOEEWESHOOP AIRLOCK ENGAGED And side by side RAVEN, NO!!! NOT WOLFWINGS SHADOWFLIGHT!!! So don't you weep With truffles, perhaps, certainly not a country pate It's not a shame Castor was probably related to URANUS somehow That the more I die On a STICK OF trident, or perhaps a bed of nailz!! AMIGA GFX You're still the same BEEP BEEP BEEP BOOP DOOP BEEP BOOP DOOP FLAP FLAP FLAP FLAP FLAP FLAP FLAP FLAP FLAP FLAP FLAP FLAP FLAP FLAP FLAP FLA FLAP FLA FL F L I P ..
Re: Look Who's Talking by OneFingerAnswer	4-Mar-03/11:54 PM
You know personaly i think you did well here. Last stanza "within" i think would click better. Now, there is a bit of blah as far as the material involved goes (just my opinion i'm sure the bible belt would disagree) but that's the joy of poetry now isn't?
Re: Scars by H0LL0WxL1F3	5-Mar-03/12:07 AM
This poem was much more interesting with the other comments. Impressive display at maintaning your credibility and the credibilty of self mutalating cry babies everywhere, may I add. Bravo.
Re: A Question Of Perception by Jigg	5-Mar-03/7:41 PM
Yes, a song? Except it's about a chorus, bridge, and two verses shy. This is a fine freeverse and properly titled so.
Re: Those Crazy's people in my brainsky by Shardik	5-Mar-03/7:52 PM
You are such a chicken, and just so unvisual. Painful really. To watch i mean. Not that I saw BECAUSE IT WAS NOT VISUAL. I REPEAT, TOTALLY UNVISUAL. And inconsiderately confusingly bland to mine eye. Meaning, well. I could not see it. No where. Not a fucking trace.
Re: Awakened by temptalia	5-Mar-03/8:08 PM
Fuck. 10.
Re: Steel Wire Frame by celiff	5-Mar-03/8:45 PM
Like a slinky twist tied together at both ends? Once when i was younger i landed in a crate full of bottles with no shoes on. While playing ping pong. It piled a huge amout of resentment in my sole (later in life) and made me realise how important my feets was. Along with loud bells to ring for toadies. And grilled cheese with high fever.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Mar-03/8:49 PM
Perched. lol.
Re: van Gogh's Irises by lastobelus	12-Mar-03/2:32 AM
THank god jesus slept in my poppies. All fucking night.@
Re: The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	12-Mar-03/2:34 AM
this would be true if you could keep your tie from getting caught in your spokes.
Re: how i love by elizabethann	20-Mar-03/4:38 PM
*Glad you are* get the tattoo, and prove it. In fact i would tattoo the poem on my tongue to really show the world the strength of your purpose and love.
Re: Nutty by Bacchus	20-Mar-03/6:34 PM
What are you? A fanatic?
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Mar-03/7:24 PM
Muhammadanism.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Mar-03/9:33 PM
Yeah.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Mar-03/9:35 PM
Shi....... period. not even worth a vote.