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The Red Light Man (Free verse) by scitz
Big hand on seven,
Little hands frozen,
Black puddles flow,
A vagrant laughs then collapses,
Here I stand waiting for her,
By her allocated lamp post,
Watched by a white man talking like a black man,
Flicking old presidents.
My hair stands up like a marine,
Ashamed of the color temptations become,
The traffic lights turn green,
Harlots cling on to the stationary buicks,
Here in the last saloon of lowlives,
I see my face blurred in shimmering puddles,
My wife at home cooking me Steak,
As I just wait for for my pound of flesh,
I feel no remorse,
I am a still membrane.
Desire is my enemy of conscience.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6537
Posted: February 27, 2003 2:23 AM PST; Last modified: July 28, 2003 8:51 AM PDT
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