| Re: The Warriors Song by cleverdevice |
12-Apr-03/12:44 AM |
/mp3/The Crutchling.mp3
Ignite this.
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| Re: Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome by Stephen Robins |
11-Apr-03/9:10 AM |
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I will quit smoking and prepare.
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| Re: a comment on Did You Notice? by Bonehiss |
11-Apr-03/9:07 AM |
Onyx sunlight
Fights extrovertadly in our chapped cloak.
Does I ignore
Your watery splendor
Freeze up into the emerald desert!
AND SO WITH ON THAT BONE.
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| Re: Dogwood Winter by Rex Karrs |
11-Apr-03/9:02 AM |
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Seems to me that you're in Korea often, Rex.
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| Re: a comment on Everything Counts by Lord Ganus |
11-Apr-03/8:55 AM |
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You should actually give a thanks to the original writers of this piece Martin and dave from Depeche mode.
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| Re: Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig |
11-Apr-03/8:38 AM |
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..................I LOVE YOU !" you can lose this, because the reader already knows, and if they don't by the end they don't deserve to.
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| Re: Februarys mother by INTRANSIT |
11-Apr-03/8:35 AM |
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"awaken until September" reach September. or, survive the journey.
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| Re: You are not me by Mutant_X |
11-Apr-03/8:33 AM |
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A typical topical right down the receptacle, "now out the window".
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| Re: Sorry for all the things by Mutant_X |
11-Apr-03/8:31 AM |
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Sincerety, is a nose wipe on a cold sleeve at the bus stop in third grade.
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| Re: You Say by adrenalize |
11-Apr-03/8:27 AM |
"The loneliness
Thatâs my only companion
And yet
You say
You want them back"
also, or too would be the last word probably 'too'.
then you could say... But that's something you can never have back, or unreturnable. and that would be putting your foot down nicely to conclude the piece.
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| Re: Originality by shwenatjadeflower |
10-Apr-03/10:34 PM |
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Once, I almost choked to death on a frozen milky~way bar while naked on pcp in a Mcdonald's walkin cooler.
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| Re: a comment on Fraternity hazing the sheepdog by horus8 |
10-Apr-03/7:50 PM |
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| Re: Tendering the question by Nanshe |
7-Apr-03/11:38 PM |
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GQTIP awarde. not that there's much competition tonight.
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| Re: For Kristen by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
7-Apr-03/11:33 PM |
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here. don't say i never did nothing for you.
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| Re: Fix it by Nanshe |
7-Apr-03/11:30 PM |
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that's a fucking aneurysm my friend, totally unfixable. however you did a wonderful job complicating an uncomplicated and ancient structure (sonnets) and that's got to count for something somewhere. and the unaccessability of the piece? also, right off the fucking charts. Great job.
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| Re: and i don't even care by nolan |
7-Apr-03/11:22 PM |
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Now that's breaking some fucking wind. lol! asl???
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| Re: a comment on Black Magic by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
6-Apr-03/9:40 PM |
Mind day, find say, dissonance cursed, ominous versed, book me, look free, night-light.
If I wanted to write a real poem on black magic and not a bilboard counting device, to see how many idiots come over to see "black magic" I would. hatmf???
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| Re: a comment on the photobooth by Bill Z Bub |
6-Apr-03/9:19 PM |
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Speaking of shit suckers... I'm amazed at how you get the corn up the straw, and the peanuts out of your teeth prior to visiting the family golden hen for another hand out. that's skill. Others may doubt it, but me, I'm impressed.
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| Re: papercut suicide by papercut |
6-Apr-03/9:06 PM |
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You could add double the amount of the already doubled amount of simplistic adjectives that you used in this piece and still not manage to cut yourself. Perhaps instead you'll cut the cheese.
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| Re: the photobooth by Bill Z Bub |
6-Apr-03/8:35 PM |
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Great title and equally written to maintain that fact.I would of gave it a nine, but I see you are still writing it so... later i guess i might.
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