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20 most recent comments by horus8 (1661-1680) and replies

Re: A Love Story For The Dead by Caducus 6-Apr-03/8:29 PM
"And seagulls cried as the boy started to wave." it had ahold of me until this line. Then I just laughed. You might consider losing it. Seriously.
Re: a comment on Say Hello by Sawa 6-Apr-03/7:01 PM
Me, and every advanced culture that's ever existed on this planet for the last 20,000 years. Even the Amazon's viewed the sun as a masculine star, and they were as dikey and stupid as it gets, but then I read this. I never knew Ra was short for Ramona. Now I do. Next you're going to tell me that Jesus was a female alien impersonating the son of god right? Please don't abuse the son because you have know understanding or control over the men in your life. It shows a closemindedness that you were really going after when you wrote this. I would believe that God was a woman before the sun, and that says a lot. In your gut, so do you, and 99.9% of the planet for 99.9% of our current history, oral and written.
Re: Rebuttal by TruthlessHero 6-Apr-03/6:04 PM
All life is temporary, and when it's pure shit out the gate it's kind of hard to tell when the payback is happening fuckface, because it never stopped, or started, it just always was. Is this your way of making a point? Because if it is? You are either projecting your own closeted insecurities about yout identity and penis size, or even worse, an uninformed self righteous security guard at walmart taking a wack at poetry. better stick with the shoplifters. I bet you thought you'd never have something in common with why farmers invented scarecrows huh? Moron.
Re: Pipedream by TruthlessHero 6-Apr-03/5:53 PM
No. The path of the grey and the red are forbidden to pick, hence, why they are that color.
Re: i cant' let him go by roses are red 6-Apr-03/5:50 PM
There is a place beyond all of this pitter patter. That place is life on the planet Earth. Try it.
Re: Mirrored Immage by poetofthestar 6-Apr-03/5:47 PM
a brilliant ennui.
Re: STAR WARS by Garrett S Sexton 6-Apr-03/5:38 PM
If I was not so depressed, this would have depressed me. I did smile slightly, although, it hurt my fece'.
Re: Me against Me by TruthlessHero 6-Apr-03/4:45 PM
Well, I came to read this thinking Mrs. garbage found something interesting, and I was right! a one for effort!
Re: How Strange by T. Becquerel 3-Apr-03/3:09 PM
How about how jessica Lynch hails from Palestine West Virginia? Isn't that Lynchianly appropriate? A quote from her dad "those folks that rescued my daughter were a brave bunch of people" I wonder how he's going to feel with an ethnic son or daughter in nine months. Let's take a moment to pray shall we. Dear whoever wherever could you please give me more psychic powers so that i may change my channel without getting up or looking for the remote. Thankyou, oh and could you give the rag heads some back ground music to their machine gun dance the next time a farmer shoots down an apache with a sling shot. It would help me absorb their glee a whole lot more since i've been warped by music television and the family feud. In the name of the father, the son and the holy toast (i mean spirit as in grey goose chilled without a glass). thank you lordy.
Re: Our Sweet Lady Lispalot by lunar 3-Apr-03/12:54 PM
Rapunthel.
Re: F**K The World by loneshadow29 3-Apr-03/12:51 PM
What happened? Did they blow up your Indonesion Disco too?
Re: The nature of Nuture by cleverdevice 3-Apr-03/12:47 PM
I'd lose "No more bothers."
But then again I have an Oedipus complex.
Re: Para Sa Aking Sinta by NewbieMe 3-Apr-03/12:03 PM
Could you please not be so boringly ethnic? It makes my morning coffee chill more rapidly. That alone is reason enough to attack you with powerful black magick... And tuna bagels.
Re: Blade by Blade 30-Mar-03/4:54 PM
Hey dick! Do you think that you can rearrange shit as you wish? watch this.
Re: psudobackstabber by Freethinker1602 30-Mar-03/4:50 PM
Flies hover over shit, but 'above' is not a term that they pray too very often... because of the maggots, you see?.
Re: Always Luv Ya by trina_marie_73 30-Mar-03/4:42 PM
ah. Now that the smoke's gone, and the air is all clear. Those who were right there have a new kind of fear. That's whynI say "hay man nice shot".
Re: Mary Jane by 2StonersThatCare 30-Mar-03/4:39 PM
Hey man nice shot, I wish I coulda mey you. but now it's a little late.
Re: Sex on the Weightbench by 2StonersThatCare 30-Mar-03/4:38 PM
Again?
Re: A Great Day For Baseball by darkhelmet10 30-Mar-03/4:37 PM
It would of worked better if your ball turned into a bomb.
Re: Unlocking Happiness by darkhelmet10 30-Mar-03/4:35 PM
If Jesus mispelled as terriffically as you, he'd listen to more Filter!


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