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Mirrored Immage (Free verse) by poetofthestar I see a face in the looking glass
It mirrors my every move
It looks like someone that I know
But I can not tell who
Her eyes are sunken in
Her smile is never there
She has an aura of sadness about her
Like she is drowning in dispair
Pictures of her line the walls
Show her smiling with hope in life
But when I see her there
She's dying from pain and strife
She all ways tries to help others
Live life without pain
As she suffers in silence
She lives her life in vain
Up the ladder:
the ones that got away
Down the ladder:
alone in winter
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Posted: April 5, 2003 10:24 AM PST; Last modified: April 5, 2003 10:24 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.904638 Overall Rank: 9822 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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6-Apr-03/5:47 PM
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a brilliant ennui.
I just want to hug you after reading this, and make you eat, it sounds like a trying to save the world anorexic girls story...
sunken eyes and dying in vain... but I give it an 8 *hug* 108 view(s)
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