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Me against Me (Free verse) by TruthlessHero I will not forget the day when the sides were chosen
Me against me against...me
Clothing so drenched with sweat
and the teeth they were clenched
Who can I trust when I...
Grabbed hold my enemy's neck
and choked 'till he ceased
Blistered with disbelief I awake dead
And when I awoke I couldn't believe it was me
All the time it was me
So many times we smile in pride
Putting such faith in what we've accomplished
But minutes ago we were (minutes ago we were)
Slitting our wrists, running for sympathy
Up the ladder:
Meeting Fronts
Down the ladder:
Another Boredom Movement
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Posted: April 4, 2003 9:26 PM PST; Last modified: April 7, 2003 12:35 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10195 Comments:
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Fear of Garbage @ 64.56.113.60
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6-Apr-03/4:40 PM
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mmm...you kindof mixed me up in the last paragraph but other than that suprisingly good
Well, I came to read this thinking Mrs. garbage found something interesting, and I was right! a one for effort!
A handy sized guff - ideal for parties, christenings, and embalmings.
A truly prawne infested jodphur of violent accomplishment. 151 view(s)
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