Me against Me

Member since 2003 · Posted 4 Apr 2003 · Edited 7 Apr 2003 · 3 comments

I will not forget the day when the sides were chosen Me against me against...me Clothing so drenched with sweat and the teeth they were clenched Who can I trust when I... Grabbed hold my enemy's neck and choked 'till he ceased Blistered with disbelief I awake dead And when I awoke I couldn't believe it was me All the time it was me So many times we smile in pride Putting such faith in what we've accomplished But minutes ago we were (minutes ago we were) Slitting our wrists, running for sympathy

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[8] Fear of Garbage 6-Apr-03/4:40 PM Reply

mmm...you kindof mixed me up in the last paragraph but other than that suprisingly good

[1] horus8 6-Apr-03/4:45 PM Reply

Well, I came to read this thinking Mrs. garbage found something interesting, and I was right! a one for effort!

[10] Stephen Robins 22-Jun-04/5:34 AM Reply

A handy sized guff - ideal for parties, christenings, and embalmings.

A truly prawne infested jodphur of violent accomplishment.