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Meeting Fronts (Free verse) by emilyowey
Fingers chasing under rain
Tapping puddles, pushing time
Lambs and clouds and imperfection
Immaculate yet dripping stains.
Friendless flowers bow and tremble
Radiate a timeless flow,
Of lovely dirt and heinous silk.
Toes are bouncing, padding, shuffling
Water washing streets with mud.
Sloshing in a sea of pure, clean drops
Of thunder
Noise boxes, cubes, round and smooth
Teeth that gnaw
At the sky
But only for a second
A flash of backward seeing nothing
The tearing and nothingness and
Light
The luminous air is suppressing
To the words that come.
Then breathing begins again.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10199
Posted: March 26, 2003 11:49 AM PST; Last modified: March 26, 2003 11:49 AM PST
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