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Rebuttal (Free verse) by TruthlessHero
The innocence robbed at early stage Bitterness allies for the cage Pain gives birth to pain And hope gets smudged with bloodstains Despise yourself to swell with pride and think your hatred will win the prize I smell a change with horizons A face in your path now gone It's an attempt to deny You'd better find an alibi Spit in the face of mercy and now the debt you owe will multiply Blame everyone but yourself while your so-called arguments tow the line A twofold edge of hate spills emotion that blinds the public eye No claims to the life of a victim Offenses a list of lost freedoms Keep mocking Keep mocking Keep mocking to fill infectious lies A bead of sweat drips cold from your brow and it's evident there's more to fear Here's a response to that message of spite that you've clung tightly to for all these years... The season is ripe for payback. And the time is right for settlement The season is ripe for payback Cant you hear the voice of reason The season is ripe for payback Understand that your comments are not forgotten You don't want to face the fact that there's a debt to pay Blame everyone but yourself But be careful what you asked for You've got your wish With Judgment, with payback Liar You've got a lot of nothing to say You've got allot of hate to spray You've got allot of nothing to say Yet your life is the meaning of temporary.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11070
Posted: April 4, 2003 9:21 PM PST; Last modified: April 7, 2003 12:36 PM PDT
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[0] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 6-Apr-03/6:04 PM | Reply
All life is temporary, and when it's pure shit out the gate it's kind of hard to tell when the payback is happening fuckface, because it never stopped, or started, it just always was. Is this your way of making a point? Because if it is? You are either projecting your own closeted insecurities about yout identity and penis size, or even worse, an uninformed self righteous security guard at walmart taking a wack at poetry. better stick with the shoplifters. I bet you thought you'd never have something in common with why farmers invented scarecrows huh? Moron.
[n/a] TruthlessHero @ 68.38.194.4 > horus8 | 7-Apr-03/12:33 PM | Reply
Only proving my point Horus8, think your hatred will win the prize
I smell a change with horizons
A face in your path now gone
It's an attempt to deny
You'd better find an alibi
Spit in the face of mercy and now the debt you owe will multiply
Liar! You've got a lot of nothing to say
You've got allot of hate to spray
You've got allot of nothing to say
Yet your life is the meaning of temporary.
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