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A Sepcial Someone (Free verse) by JustLin
A Special Someone I search, I yearn Desperate for love I search in and out Searching each and every day A Special Someone Holds the key to my heart With power to embrace my soul With passion of fire to capture my needs A Special Someone With that kinda feeling Loving me whole heartily Sheltering me from hurt Comfort me when in pain A Special Someone With an open mind Standing us together through good and bad Sharing the happiness Sharing the sadness Willing to forgive and forget A Special Someone With one’s touch Holding his gentle arms around me Kissing me soflty with his supple lips Caressing me with his bare hands A Special Someone I till search, I still yearn For that day has yet to come nor I fear it will never become

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11074
Posted: March 31, 2003 10:42 PM PST; Last modified: March 31, 2003 10:42 PM PST
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Comments:
[n/a] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 1-Apr-03/5:43 AM | Reply
and i cant spell cheesy
[n/a] JackCrawley @ 168.30.194.107 > Caducus | 1-Apr-03/11:21 AM | Reply
No, you can't. But now I'd really like to see a chessy greeting card--what exactly would that be?
[6] Katie2 @ 216.78.240.89 | 1-Apr-03/12:33 PM | Reply
:) I'll give you a :)
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