Re: A heart without keys by sliver	10-Nov-03/2:13 AM
I've read color printed hand folded scientology brochures with more promise.
Re: Octubre 1992 by The Eskimo King	10-Nov-03/1:56 AM
What do you get when you cross polar bears with a famous soft drink? Bipolar autistic brats with bad teeth and poor taste in advertising naturally.
Re: Why...? by muffielouise	10-Nov-03/1:48 AM
Please do, but not in front of me. I'm not wearing shoes.
Re: paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined	10-Nov-03/1:21 AM
Thank god for the last two sentences becauses I almost wretched from Ikea poetry overload.
Re: Hands by frostygirl	10-Nov-03/1:05 AM
That's the slut in you going for seconds.
Re: a comment on Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer	8-Nov-03/7:02 PM
If you make it sandpaper? You're on!
Re: a comment on Awefucked by a Shushin Shitzu (freefuck) by <{Baba^Yaga}>	8-Nov-03/6:57 PM
You would be honored if a piece of toast gummed itself to death with a newpaper and coffee; you fucking semi colon; toting colon.
Re: Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer	8-Nov-03/6:51 PM
how about " five Rhyming reasons why peach pie reminds me of your buried corpse".?
Re: Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer	8-Nov-03/6:48 PM
My title suggestion would be "Any title but that one" . Or "Whatever happened to Viking Burials".
Re: The Burial by Mona Lisa	8-Nov-03/3:21 PM
Good form and attention to structure, but cliche imagery.
Re: The lasts of Joe by Freethinker1602	8-Nov-03/3:09 PM
Quit sniffling! What kind of satanist are you? How can you be proper and evil wearing that cockerspaniel hat and a pink tutu?
Re: Greybie Blue by abecedarian	8-Nov-03/3:04 PM
Are you trying to say something?
Re: an early discovery (reworking) by richa	8-Nov-03/1:16 PM
Your wanker award alone catches a ten from this poeat.
Re: a comment on The dog that loved a chicken by <{Baba^Yaga}>	5-Nov-03/1:49 PM
Also, re read it. I did an edit.
Re: a comment on intent to refrain by skaskowski	5-Nov-03/1:44 PM
Good one.
Re: The Thrapper by You are a fat fucker	5-Nov-03/1:19 PM
Swit.
Re: I AM THE BEST by ____________________	5-Nov-03/12:59 PM
I obsolve thee. Go with God my bun.
Re: a comment on Aspic by Shardik	4-Nov-03/6:44 AM
Legally?
Re: More same than before by Patsy	3-Nov-03/10:35 PM
I would edit you, if you would swallow me.
Re: a fiction by Patsy	3-Nov-03/10:33 PM
Fisting is better with the ones you love.