on A heart without keys by sliver
10 Nov 2003, 2:13 AM
I've read color printed hand folded scientology brochures with more promise.
on Octubre 1992 by The Eskimo King
10 Nov 2003, 1:56 AM
What do you get when you cross polar bears with a famous soft drink? Bipolar autistic brats with bad teeth and poor taste in advertising naturally.
on Why...? by muffielouise
10 Nov 2003, 1:48 AM
Please do, but not in front of me. I'm not wearing shoes.
on paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined
10 Nov 2003, 1:21 AM
Thank god for the last two sentences becauses I almost wretched from Ikea poetry overload.
on Hands by frostygirl
10 Nov 2003, 1:05 AM
That's the slut in you going for seconds.
replying on Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer
8 Nov 2003, 7:02 PM
If you make it sandpaper? You're on!
replying on Awefucked by a Shushin Shitzu (freefuck) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
8 Nov 2003, 6:57 PM
You would be honored if a piece of toast gummed itself to death with a newpaper and coffee; you fucking semi colon; toting colon.
on Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer
8 Nov 2003, 6:51 PM
how about " five Rhyming reasons why peach pie reminds me of your buried corpse".?
on Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer
8 Nov 2003, 6:48 PM
My title suggestion would be "Any title but that one" . Or "Whatever happened to Viking Burials".
on The Burial by Mona Lisa
8 Nov 2003, 3:21 PM
Good form and attention to structure, but cliche imagery.
on The lasts of Joe by Freethinker1602
8 Nov 2003, 3:09 PM
Quit sniffling! What kind of satanist are you? How can you be proper and evil wearing that cockerspaniel hat and a pink tutu?
on Greybie Blue by abecedarian
8 Nov 2003, 3:04 PM
Are you trying to say something?
on an early discovery (reworking) by richa
8 Nov 2003, 1:16 PM
Your wanker award alone catches a ten from this poeat.
replying on The dog that loved a chicken by <{Baba^Yaga}>
5 Nov 2003, 1:49 PM
Also, re read it. I did an edit.
replying on intent to refrain by skaskowski
5 Nov 2003, 1:44 PM
Good one.
on The Thrapper by You are a fat fucker
5 Nov 2003, 1:19 PM
Swit.
on I AM THE BEST by ____________________
5 Nov 2003, 12:59 PM
I obsolve thee. Go with God my bun.
on More same than before by Patsy
3 Nov 2003, 10:35 PM
I would edit you, if you would swallow me.