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Free verse № 73393

a fiction

Member since 2003 · Posted 3 Nov 2003 · 1 comment

A view of the ground has cheapened the sky. I am only a small goat on the face (nose) of the planet and i cannot cling as a spider must. i will not allow you to trust my words, i define my self as: laying here, fearless, i hope tried, i am flavourless, savourless rattle rattle Flap my papery wings >< cover you in salt water Be not afraid said i, i, i i believe none of it, Nunavut. i care not for stubby creation / innovate! So. So. Sh. i will examine your self / yourself like a stubbed toe because there is no evidence. there: but no flare to send up no flare. i knew you wanted my knuckles to validate your throbbing toe

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[9] horus8 3-Nov-03/10:33 PM Reply
Fisting is better with the ones you love.