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Octubre 1992

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Nov 2003 · 4 comments

"Descansa CorazÃ³n" Duerme corazÃ³n se nubla el cielo la tormenta harÃ¡ mÃ¡s fuerte la lluvia la razÃ³n cuidarÃ¡ tu sueÃ±o para que no te haga daÃ±o la duda. Reposa en el lecho de la ilusiÃ³n vestido con las sabanas de la esperanza almohadas de gratos recuerdos y por cobija tus ansias. SueÃ±a con el resplandeciente sol la serenidad de ese mar en calma la fresca brisa del atardecer y la luna llena romÃ¡ntica. Flota en la aparente oscuridad de una noche sin estrellas que tus latidos marquen el rumbo hacia esas cosas sublimes y por demÃ¡s bellas. Octubre 1992

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[n/a] horus8 10-Nov-03/1:56 AM Reply

What do you get when you cross polar bears with a famous soft drink? Bipolar autistic brats with bad teeth and poor taste in advertising naturally.

[n/a] Shuushin 10-Nov-03/10:51 AM Reply

I won't hazard a vote, but even without the benefit of knowing the language enough to get a proper impression, there are few thoughts I like (or at least what I think they are, I like).

the idea of doubt creating damage in this way feels like something I want to know more about.

saying the full moon is romantic, is a bit 'done', though - regardless of the language, especially since this piece is rich in descriptors.

Flat translation:
Duer to me heart becomes cloudy the sky the storm will make more fort rain the reason will take care of your dream so that the doubt does not do damage to you. It rests in the bed of the illusion dressed in savannahs of the hope pillows of pleasing memories and by blanket your anxieties. It dreams about the shining sun the serenity of that sea in calm the fresh breeze of the dusk and the romantic Full Moon. Fleet in the apparent dark of one night without stars that your beats plot the course towards those sublime and beside the point beautiful things.

[n/a] Shuushin 10-Nov-03/11:03 AM Reply

And by the way, your pies: ARE AWESOME!!

[6] nentwined 4-Oct-06/5:53 PM Reply

no habla. :/

Babelfish gives me: ""Heart Rests" Duer to me heart becomes cloudy the sky the storm will make more fort rain the reason will take care of your dream so that the doubt does not do damage to you. It rests in the bed of the illusion dressed in savannahs of the hope pillows of pleasing memories and by blanket your anxieties. It dreams about the shining sun the serenity of that sea in calm the fresh breeze of the dusk and the romantic Full Moon. Fleet in the apparent dark of one night without stars that your beats plot the course towards those sublime and beside the point beautiful things."

To which I say... hmm. Some pretty words?

I'm an ignorant American.