More same than before

Member since 2003 · Posted 3 Nov 2003 · 2 comments

i want to know why, apparently, i am ephemeral. it seems that i am not the penny in your pocket, the one you covet and horde, the one you shine and wish on the one you would never throw into the fountain- i am not that. i am the hole in your pocket, the one your finger is always punched through. i am the worried-out patch in your sock the one you miss at the thought of darning the space you feel as place the absence you would miss- i am this

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[8] horus8 3-Nov-03/10:35 PM Reply

I would edit you, if you would swallow me.

[7] basit_i 4-Jan-04/12:26 AM Reply

...they need point-fives when voting.