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Excite (Free verse) by Shade_dreamer
Does it excite you does it move you images of the bound embrace held helpless by desire held fast in place strong hands explore your every space lips on breast teeth on neck as you stand helpless, exposed hands in air head thrown back beggging for release stroking caressing grasping gasping taunting enticing moaning aching only now is it time only now can it be through trembling lips the word comes... please you surrender to my want I consume your every need

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7304
Posted: January 9, 2004 2:03 PM PST; Last modified: January 9, 2004 2:03 PM PST
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[9] titan69 @ 62.31.23.84 | 10-Jan-04/12:49 AM | Reply
now this pome has got it, I could see every thing. Well done.9/10
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