poemranker ::Excite by Shade_dreamer

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Free verse № 79060

Excite

Member since 2004 · Posted 9 Jan 2004 · 1 comment

Does it excite you does it move you images of the bound embrace held helpless by desire held fast in place strong hands explore your every space lips on breast teeth on neck as you stand helpless, exposed hands in air head thrown back beggging for release stroking caressing grasping gasping taunting enticing moaning aching only now is it time only now can it be through trembling lips the word comes... please you surrender to my want I consume your every need

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[9] titan69 10-Jan-04/12:49 AM Reply
now this pome has got it, I could see every thing. Well done.9/10