Re: Let's praise the flesh peddler by horus8	13-Aug-02/8:50 PM
evening z..i wish i could talk more, but people think i'm weird when i'm jacking around with my palm pilot at social functions..it's kinda like reading at a bus stop in east la. hazardous.this place is fucking LAME i'm outta here in twenty minutes unless that brunette is sophia coppolae
Re: NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8	13-Aug-02/8:42 PM
listen..for the love of jesu'..i know i make alot of shit up, but i'm being on the level with you. the poem was inspired by that previously mentioned media clip (strip bar priest). it's all true. my grandma died (lung cancer). the kids were cutting pumpkins for halloween(my cousins) and i lived with my aunt in vegas for almost a year(i was on the lam for stealing a shipment of seventeen big screen tvs in Mi.) i am an honest story teller, a lying poet, but an honest story teller. i am not a richard farina, not yet. there is nothing wrong with this poem bastardette it's an honest day work.s
Re: Let's praise the flesh peddler by horus8	13-Aug-02/8:35 PM
sorry about that, it was just an old piece of shite laying around from the flood of 97,(it only rained in my mind. it rained crumple dollared bills and pills) so i decided to practice my sailor tongued phillapino in a basket spin. i don't know yet. i e-mailed it to my grandma (she still teaches kindergarten) to see what she thinks. She's a great editor. everyone go hug your grandmas now before it's to late. p.s i am undeserving, in my reallity you people don't exist, and i'm just talking to myself. like throwing a frisbee in the wind baby, which means it's all escapism, and if i offend anyone, your just a figment of my imagination anyway, so fuck me . Why don't i just go fuck myself. would that be okay? to bad i already puulled it out. close the partition limo driver, oh...and take your time... e
Re: The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog	13-Aug-02/6:19 PM
Island folk love their drift wood, and seed floats. i wish it were longer and stronger. i like the (stuff) though. long live the queen and the beasts from the bog! welcome...lovely name.
Re: Song of departure by kawakurdi	13-Aug-02/3:40 PM
take me back to the treehouse, the can phone, friui picked lunches, and four seasons distinctive..the phone rings in the house..i know it's not for me..eight year olds don't get phone calls yet..they are still free to day dream..lucky, and brimming with summer warmed stories. beautifull texture and powerful sentencing 8/10.
Re: NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8	13-Aug-02/1:45 PM
how long has it been since you've voted? rebel! oh bringer of the uncooth hand shake i am your vanilla wrist.and you're right. exactly. but the inspiration came from much much more..i was stripping at this gay club called the wild goose in gross point, mich. (19yrld) this high ranking priest (from a religious school across the river in windsor) would visit often..for lap dances..we got to be friends, and i borrowed some money to visit my "dying grandma in vegas". 9,000$. i never went back.he kept the waterbed. i lived with my aunt in vegas and framed houses i will never live in. my skin grew very dark muscles sculpted hair long like judas.. yes i sin. i took the silver.. bluecollar suburban shaman i've touched the nape of juno's peacock, and folded into "that which is isn't that which can undo what's done" forgive me.
Re: Day of Reckoning by Lenore	13-Aug-02/1:01 PM
wow, d.a....don't have an anuerysm, i was just fuckin around, you know 'joking', and no he's not from misery, usa..you fairy fart..he's from cleveland....and was considered to be the american version of rimbaud..he was murdered at the age of 26, (by the government) and now his ghost haunts these corridors(him and his friends were called the underground thought patrol, if you don't believe me look it up'i'm serious') as dark angel.here is a qoute from CLEVELAND UNDERCOVERS "but that was then/NOW i am, and do not expect/tomorrow or yesterday today. instead i write in exstacy/and when someone stops to say/"Hey, that's not true!"/i yell backwards,"For who........and fuck rhyme."i have a city to cover with lines, with textured words & the sweat brick-flesh images of a drunken tied-up whore house cowtown/sprawling and brawling on its back." p.s that's why i put up with his genius, he is my favorite poet. thanks again lenore for your space and words. i hope i didn't sound absurd
Re: Day of Reckoning by Lenore	13-Aug-02/11:45 AM
wait hold everything..why i hold my penis..sure this isn't the most stylish, intelligent, or multi faceted piece, but it's got villianous, deceit,bashing, blood evil doings, and sickly sweey smells...and most of all..big boobies terrorizing..that's not so bad..we can't always fuck sylvia plath(who wasn't good looking anyway) sometimes we need a heather thomas poem to stimulate the flacid capilaries..lighten up d.a.. no one thought you would like it any way..most of us have a keen awareness of what you like.. you no deep movies like xxx, and muscle shows, drag racing, ding dongs, and science fiction comic books, which is why your a demigouge w/ a nucleur fissioned engine. morning guys. my thumb still hurts.it's officially a vicadine day. so mote it be!s
Re: Day of Reckoning by Lenore	12-Aug-02/6:35 PM
hi lenore...honey, you know i give two shits about spelling as long as you tried hard or were genuine, but on line 16 i'm positive you meant throne, love you.take care.fix it or not. i'll vote twice. i thought for a second it might work as thrown..then i was like naw...even i know better.loves again..be well..soft.swear.sugar.on.the.asphalt. great nasty poem it's what i call a 'puffer'. or if you like the violent femmes it's a "blister in the sun". "let me go on". "i hope you know that this will go down on your permanent record" finger up to the gods of revenge and lust and all that other glorious pilliging...go berzerk!w
Re: drowning in the bookstore by yarlgrenn	12-Aug-02/6:02 PM
oh my god.jesus fucking christ.i don't even have an award for this, but i will soon. it's an anticlimactic fusion of the source and the ending it touches everything by not trying [sik] holy shit! yes, yes indeed, i.i.i.ifeel.u.u.u. through lead, when termites sink shiny new friggates off of some barren african shore..we will hold hands as brothers fit to babtise dusk. the termites will bring the creations of man's creations down in maddening swarms, as we watch,they eat, it's a million years from now, and we have lost our fifth digits and alovar processess to evolution. born with no tonsils, or appendixs' the sun has turned red dwarf. the ants will win the war. we just watch forever! neutral.h
Re: rain shadow by yarlgrenn	12-Aug-02/5:09 PM
still so familiar it brings the hair up on the back of my neck..fuck! unreal! you are the aloe-vera at the shriner's hospital.. balcony.actor.emancipation proclamation.applause!!!!!!!!!!!t
Re: flickering light by yarlgrenn	12-Aug-02/5:03 PM
once again..i must say you have a style edge clean and un-needy..you give before you take, and your timing shows a sensibility that some take years to find let alone understand(i have no timing, still learning) i hear your words in moving pictures they play on the backs of my sleep deprived eye lids as the drive-in theaters of old, you my friend are a relic to be enjoyed with a slow turning of the hand..they will come to read you, cuz you need to be read! i salute you..
Re: the end of time by yarlgrenn	12-Aug-02/4:50 PM
horus8 prize for SETTING A MOOD TO BE MODELED after AWARD, a very rare prize indeed... mantel it well! because other wise the elitists from the "National Library of Poetry" might take it away and invite you to read poetry in D.C to a bunch of nerdtits who eweeee and aweee.god forbid you're to good. stay that way for mother and the silence we all yearn for 'between our ears''
Re: An Online Junkie Confesses by Jigg	12-Aug-02/1:02 PM
by the way i was the one who gave you a seven here, for the love of god!@
Re: Joe likes "DYNAMITE"! by horus8	12-Aug-02/12:56 PM
oh no.. not the drawing board. i will not lie to my teacher..i will not lie to my teacher..i will not. if you sense it ..it must be right. yes i'm a shallow homophobic (male hustler) and a mindless over sedater (junky) plus i have been known to make horrible decisions and not take responsibility for my actions, or all of this could be all invented fiction and child like fibbing to instigate thought provoking inuendos..naw..it's just ming gas. excuse me. p.s <to hear horus8 play a wide variety of instruments and compose music go to gangbox.com and visit mp3's there are hookers and larry flynt auctioning them off at the beginning for those of you with quicktime. it really plays better than it reads> sorry for the sell-out-plug, but people should see all sides before a lemming effect roots. i love the "wind is a bastard", and i've read all of your work you've read maybe one of mine, lazy boy), so i guess that means i actually care, and i'm not just making assumptions. you're an excellent writer, we can't please everyone all the time.now can we???
Re: The Nicotine Addicts Jangling Tobbaconists Conversation by Jigg	12-Aug-02/11:58 AM
ok. your right...your title is a better poem then your poem..as for personal slurs..i'm typing left handed today and i'm on lithium...i have a dislocated thumb, and a rash on my pecker(from wetsuit) i smoke marlboros cuz it helps me hide my evil pock marked face..plus it helps me get laid and feel better about my tiny pud..i'm sorry..so sorry about the insinuation...here allow me to correct myself..i meant to say wow..what an impressive work of staggering genius..yes! this is exactly how i feel, and what i believe all smokers must feel and think..you are a prophet and a righteous manhandler..oops..man..woman.fuckit.skilled writer.insightful. you have distinction and you jigg better then god..what were we talking about oh yeah..commenting specifically on the poem, not the creator of the poem, because of course they have nothing in common according to some undeserving wretches, your rhyming is mediocre if even that..the setup is non existent and your descriptive senses border on the feeling i get when i step in urine first thing in the morning with a brand new pair of socks on..i love it..lets smoke ourselves towards more pee to step in.yes lets..o
Re: Am I by mozac	12-Aug-02/11:32 AM
this is the javelin that will kill d.a, the i ching of badda bing, let me guess..you gave yourself the seven to set the mode..right? who cares.. the poem is so balanced that it never moves..you could say all of this with a phrase or a word "taoistic-stagnation". it just never moves for the love of a mutilated jehova witness.. help me help you. tow it to a garage for repairs..i will pick up the tab. for i am as rich as a pauper, as thick as an unlit wick see how fun..this could go on forever, but it wont....
Re: in a parking lot by <~>	12-Aug-02/11:17 AM
morning z, thankyou..i dislocated my thumb surfing this weekend, and every movement THROBS! ouch... this grand ole opry above is as splendid as dark angels face...i love this poem it is a 'skeleton key' and penetrates with a sink factor 'icarus' your writing is both acute and wise with just enough child like curiousity to save the church. you, d.a, razora, and shaskowski..to name a few..are reason enough for me to keep on keeping on..i appreciate the way you observe the universe, and i learn from your descriptions and hidden discoveries, and the others i've mentioned above also do that in spades..i need to smoke a joint now,and gets some coffee, god bless the sneezers! carry on. 
Re: The Nicotine Addicts Jangling Tobbaconists Conversation by Jigg	12-Aug-02/10:51 AM
how about some gasoline, and i guide book to" fraud, the easy way to make money". Dr. Suess was a bum bugger, but he had talent. maybe you just bugger..g
Re: Extra Ordinary by eviltwin	12-Aug-02/1:22 AM
> (this has nothing to do with you evil twin just ryan and the others) (just go to the chat area to get the back story..you no the one that fucks your e-mail with the air of uppitiness!....oh no! i've lost... "godwinks flaw" awe.. what if i wasn't trying to win(win what?).this isn't an argument or a contest..and fuck your laws! you can quote the laws of physics to your head gear ladened niece until she defies gravity and sits on telephone wires with rolling pigeons. (by the way there is not one hitler or nazi reference in what i wrote only "dictator-esque" don't make me define the difference..you're really not worth the trouble, but be accurate if you're gonna talk shit) (and nazis weren't the first to burn books nor will they be the last <alexandria> <constantanople>)(you guys even suck at stereotyping symbolism? jesus fucking christ why am i even writing this?) and why can't that individual (ryan) speak on their own. ??what a bunch of arrogant cockholds, i am literally wobbling on the verge of a most unsavory rant...pullback..must.control..ok. i'm amused, to say the least, but i have to ask ..is this a joke? ??i mean your joking right? ??are you all that elite and above it? attention, attention, as the illiterate rate in america soars, these noblemen and scholars fondel eachothers nerdtits until they all go and LOL!ah. ha.ha. ??i am so amused by how serious you take all this bullshit that i'm blabbin, but what? not your own writing? e-mail me some of your "work" please , u might suprise me. <fuck you>, spineless shephards run from storms then blame nature for their loss. i ??blame nothing, not even your pompous inability to communicate. what specialists!, what radicals!...oh my pussy hurts..please don't write fuck in my comment boxes..i might feel dirty and finger bang my cat with a double A battery. there is no difference between fuck and "polysyllabic" or cunt or motherfucker..i have to read third grade recapitualations on summer camp and lover removal and god, and god and jesus and then they're is all of these(on this site) other satanist cry babys (remember satanists don't cry cuz they fuck and kill babies) it's hillarious(but i don't mind writing is NEUTRAL BUT OPINIONATED and i live by it), and then there's the council of elders and various "laws" are you guys that fucking bored and stuck on eachother's blow dryer ass kissing? what the fuck? are you that "not in control of your real life" that you have to scrape that low? fine you win. keep your laws. and your sense of right <cuz you don't write>, and your lol, and all of that other ripped off shit and abbrvs, and your hand on your dictionaries, so you can impress and giggle like politicians overweight and overpaid fighting over the greasy pork rib of the day("should we do this", "or how about that".."Oh i don't know they might sue", what the fuck are you talking about? do me a favor steal my shit and wipe your asses with it. it would be the most penetrating point to touch your pinched asses since your thumb magic of old in the bath tub when no one was looking) i bow to you over informed "eyes' of god "...{mob scene voice over}"you call those blinder's?" said louie the lamb to one knuckle sam, "naw that's a wall boss, and a tall one at that". enjoy. your restrictions you deserve every fucking bit of it. p.s {dark a} was right, this side of the fence is SIDELESS! where condoms please! prevent your own cloning. save me the trouble of climbing the clock tower. Lol right! ASl.yeah! lol.such a clever bunch i never stood a chance........... bye ryan.. i thought we connected... love is strange, but stupidity is priceless..west nile to you all and to all a..(fill in the rest with one of your strategic "laws") you need the practice! (by the way this poem is greaaat 10, and this comment above has nothing to do with this poem, thank you evil twin for the space))